Reviews for He'll be the one |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Keep going you have me hooked. I was just complaining to my husband that I hadn't read any good Lit fics in a couple of days. And then I found yours and I can't wait to see where you go with it. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really good so far. I can't wait for them to meet again. Update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() torture i can't wait to see what happens |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter & more please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes it's a filler, but a good filler. Please keep writing... |
![]() ![]() ![]() good |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok love it and i tought it was rory lol and did you say jess had a gf? i hope so,k things i want to see :D jess not falling for so quick, um liz and tj and Doula ( i call her dee) liking jess more then rory i alway hated how jess' family liked rory better (sad) um thats all i can think of i dont feel to good right now update love it and those thing i would LOVE to see |
![]() ![]() ![]() i thought that was rory! i got to the 'you did want to get in his pants' part and i was like whoa okay back up! love this update please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter & more please |
![]() ![]() ![]() you had me thinking that lorelai was rory! i had to read the line about "beer" three times before it actually clicked. very well done! i'm really liking this story. i'm not usually one for stories other than JavaJunkie, but i like this. you should feel special, and not "stop eating the paste special" either! lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() really nice twist at the beginning! i really thought it was Rory but the conversation was good! i like to see Jess and Lorelai get along. i'm glad i gave this story a try. hope you'll update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the whole Jess and Lorelai talk and I agree with you that the only way that Rory and Jess' relationship will work is if Jess gets along with Lorelai. Good chapter, Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing start, I cannot wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this is really good! I enjoyed reading it. I'm a huge Rory/Jess (and Luke/Lorelai) shipper, and I think you've captured them wonderfully. I really like the setup — can't wait to read more! |