Reviews for We'll Try
TwilightLover118 chapter 8 . 9/7/2009
You asked for possible ideas in the authors note,and I see you haven't updated since February, so I thought I'd give it a shot.I think it would be interesting to have Renee or Charlie visit and see if Bella can handle not being able to remember and their scent. Or Edward could take Bella to meet the Denali Clan, and she could get really jealous of Tanya :) OR maybe you could have the Cullens get together again for Bella's first time playing vampire baseball! I like the last one the best. Your choice though, if you wanna you one or not I don't mind. Okay now I can review :) I have to say I'm 100% guilty of reading and not reviewing but every so often I come across a story that I love so much, I just HAVE to review! Yours is one of them :) I love the way you have Bella's vampire moments! It's exactly how I wanted it to be in Breaking Dawn. But no, Bella couldn't enjoy her first vampire moments between her and Edward cause they had a baby! I also love your lemons :) Most people have Edward and Bella so OOC while having sex, you have them acting PERFECT! I could just picture Edward saying hes horny ahahahaha! I just hope you didn't abandon this fic because I would be very upset! Hope to see an update soon!

-Twilightlover118 (aka Marie :))
2cool4school chapter 2 . 2/25/2009
michelleoldfanfic chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
Wow that was steamy - and very beautifully written. I can't wait to read the rest.
Sarkule chapter 8 . 6/25/2008
woo! awesome story! poor craig lol
Cometakeawalkwithme chapter 8 . 6/22/2008
Pls update soon!
gec chapter 7 . 3/2/2008
after volturi arrive at the apt., "You have kept your died (diet?)", keep writing!
latuacantante4him chapter 8 . 2/28/2008
LOL! I love it!
Rhen Nightshade chapter 8 . 2/19/2008
I. Love. It.

Really, I do.

I did always think that Bella was... pursuasive...

Where'd you get the name Craig? It doesn't seem very... human.
Booth'slittleanthropologist chapter 4 . 2/13/2008
Funniest line anyone has ever written that Edward said.

I’m horny. Really horny.

Pure funny...

My parents thought I was crazy laughing that hard.

tu es mon ame chapter 8 . 2/12/2008
hehe poor craig.
Artemis Rampant chapter 8 . 2/11/2008
I really like this so far, actually. I love these "post-change Bella" storylines, especially since so few people dare to write them (though they are getting a little more common). Keep it up! I'm not sure where it should go next, but maybe something should force them and Craig to relocate? I think they're getting a bit too *comfortable* there at Dartmouth...
barbiedoll123 chapter 8 . 2/9/2008
dun dun dun
EvilBunny101 chapter 8 . 2/9/2008
Great chappie! Well, chapters really...this is really good. I like Bella's power. Kinda funny actually when she did that with Edward while Craig was there. I couldn't quit laughing. But ya...great chappies! Please update soon!

saphira341 chapter 8 . 2/9/2008
That was an AMAZING !

chapter :)
VolleyballKiller1212 chapter 8 . 2/9/2008
L-O-freakin-L! too funny. I loved this one, majorly HAWT! ;]
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