Reviews for Screaming Eagle
fears up side chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
pretty good. it was realy well written
g chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
You need better grammer and need to put each new piece of dialoge in a new paragraph. Also, you don't need to put "Flashback", "End Flashback", just describe the flashback better(in the past, place, etc.)
g chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
Good overall story. Did skip from 3rd person to 1st person at end though.