Reviews for Watching Your Liquor
igeisha chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
it is good, but bourbon wasn't him. Tooru Amuro was bourbon- though this is still believable before the revelation. Stunning story.
Joon chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
Whoa... I'm rendered speechless.

I love this fic! I don't actually believe that Hattori might be Bourbon, too. But this kind of development will shock the whole of DC fans if it is true!
GothicAngel09 chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
This fic...this fic is gonna haunt me now until the series ends. It is so believable,everything fits! And although I agree that it would be pretty awesome and a crazy plot twist to have him be Bourbon,I love Heiji and it would kill me to have him end up being one of the bad I hope it doesn't happen. Great job on this!
skdc8595 chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
a very interesting story...and it's not unbelievable, not like other stories...and what if Heiji is really will gonna be more interesting...
Irrelevancy chapter 1 . 10/4/2009

This was...


...Now I'mma be haunted by AUs of Heiji as a spy for the BO...


Angst ensues those visions.

A Bibliophile chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
This was amazing! You should make a sequel showing some of the other POVs and aftermath-ish stuff.

I don't know what characters I feel sorry for and which ones I hate. I think this story is so awesome.
juncici chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
That... That had me *believing*.

When I saw you had a spoiler, I went over and read 622. I was like, OK, not scared of spoilers now!

But then came back to read this. And it was LIKE A SPOILER! O A O Omygod you had me believing Hattori would do this! It's so real... I can totally see Hattori doing this for Kazuha... - A - It's...

;_; I'll never see Heiji in the same way again! Until DC finishes I'll never be able to just see him as Hattori Heiji! I'd be so suspicious.

Semi-Retired Writer chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
Wow... It was so different from other fan fictions I've read... I LOVED IT! This was really good!
Hattori-Obsessed chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
You are officially a genius! That was amazing, I had no idea whatsoever. I loved the ending twist. I suppose it isn't really all that likely... but it is a deliciously surprising thought.

Very well written too.
Hydok chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
oh wow. oh yes. oh amazing. i hug you. yeah. no words for this one. wow...
Kat Morning chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
Wow! I liked this, disturbing as it was. Heiji really is the perfect spy, and this wouldn't be so scary if it wasn't so possible.
RiaSternchen chapter 1 . 9/23/2007
Oh my god! NOW Im freaking afraid this could be the case!


If this really happens youre a WITCH! (I dont want it to happen!)

But in a way it would be bloody brilliant!

Liked it, but at the same time didnt ó_ò
Kittymama12 chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
s2lou chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
This was... awesome, sad, so well written, really disturbing, hopefully AU and FREAKING scary.

But. There's a but. It can't be that Hattori's a spy sent by the Org to corner and kill Haibara. Simply because Heiji appeared in the manga much sooner than Ai did... and he had been sent to spy Kudo first, like you suggested in your story, they should have moved much sooner too. (the B.O, I mean.) Moreover, Haibara would've 'sensed' him, like she did in chapter 622... and I REFUSE to believe such a thing. I think this is gonna keep me awake in my bed for the next three or four nights... you can be glad
Claude le noctambule chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
Well, an interessing idea, and in my opinion, you've made it believable and IC.

In the "What if someone we knew was one of them", I've never seen something as convincing since I've read Ytak's fic about Takagi._

You've take the times to built an interessing backstory which could connect the basic idea with canon without creating contradiction, and it was fascinating to see how much Heiji was trapped with his own gordian nod and his mixed feelings toward Kudo, Ai and the black org.

And I love how his pride and his feelings toward his father were the trigger which push him to sold his soul in the beguining.

Wonderfully dark...And no, I don't think it was ? ?No.

Oh and...In my honest opinion...We need more fics about Heiji WITHOUT Kazuha, so don't feel too guilty to have avoid this path for your first fic about the west XD

Add to fav, keep up the good work, et caetera...
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