|Reviews for Sacrifice a Swan|
| UNKNOWN FANGIRL chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
Omfg I loved this and the ending about hell..
| nicole9017 chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
I dont know what to say. Three words: scary,amazing and awesome! :) It has been made my fav fic! Plz make more of this! I enjoy reading ur fics a lot. :D
| Warriors Will chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
Definitely erotic and hot that's for sure. And what a unique and well worded story I'm impartial till I read the very end and I must say I loved it. Hot irrisistable and sexy lemon. PLEASE DON'T RESPOND I'll be horrified that I am remembered I reviewed a lemon. I'm a closet pervert and I'm ashamed of that.
| mmmmllll chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
damn keep up the good work! xD
| I love Alphonse Elric chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
Damn...so hottt :D
| silentscreamer73 chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
I frigging love you man! That was really sweet and sad and jsut plain. . uh. .God, I can't even describe it, it was just that awesome! Dude you rock! :)
| sasunaru2themax chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
OMG!...This was sooo...hot...scary and aw one point 9the knee bit almsot made me pass out) Sadly i love horro since i have a good imagination by the fact i can picture it as i read it and i was doing so and it wasn't that scary but you're so good at descriptions i just couldn't stop shuddering. :D xxxxxxxxxx
| ITASASUxOBSESSION chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
wow...the story was... i actually have no idea what to say i can't find the right words all i know is that is was brilliant! amazingly written and very detailed
i love itachi so deliciously evil ;)
and i love how sasuke hated the sex in the begening but loved it in the end XD
oh and btw that was one of the best lemons i've read! wow...XP
| damselwish chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
this is absolutely amazing,
this beats most stories by a long shot
which is a lot to say considering ive probably read most of the itasasu stories on here
please make more stories for us all to enjoy
| Danie Alleen chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
Ah, seu português não é muito ruim. Perdão por eu não falar no seu idioma, é que meu inglês é horrível! Eu amei seu modo de escrever, e suas histórias são muito boas! Teria você Messenger (msn)? Até mais
| Midnight x Poker chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
ItaSasu has seriously become my guilty pleasure XD And you're the only person I can find who writes it the way I like to read it (That sounds so weird...)
Out of all of the ones of yours I've read, this one has to be my favourite. Like the person who requested it, I can't help loving predator/prey relationships. Especially of the Uchihacest variety.
(This is gonna seem like I'm rambling on but bear with me- I don't usually leave reviews because I'm so poor at it, but seeing as I finally found an author who can write ItaSasu so well, I HAD to review)
So anyway, major props for having a grasp on the english language- an annoyingly few amount of people on this site do, no disrespect to them.
I adore your writing style; it's concise and to the point, yet with descriptions clear enough that I actually have a picture of everything you're saying (which, y'know, you want when you're reading)
You portray the characters thoughts and feelings excellently. Your sex scenes aren't disgusting (that doesn't sound like a compliment, does it? it is, trust me. I usually don't like reading lemons/limes/whatever fruit takes the authors fancy, because it's just described... well, poorly, and makes me wince, but yours aren't and don't. It's done classily.) In a lot of fanfics I've read, the characters speech or actions seem random and I'm left wondering why on earth they've done or said what they did (of course, to move the plot along for the author's convenience, but it just doesn't flow with the story, you know?) You don't do that though. You show the character's thought process and inner conflicts, so everything makes sense and makes for a very happy me XD
So, yeah. I'm gonna shut up now because you're probably very bored of reading this. Still, everyone likes a bit of praise now and again, right? I can't wait to see more from you! There's a sinfully small amount of great ItaSasu, but you're definitely changing that XD
- Ariana x
| siarafaerie-101-miss chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
it was great, i loved it!
| opusmoderandi chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
I love all your fics and stalk you compulsively
Seriously, this was the first Uchihacest fanfic that really made me gasp in wonder and amazement; it's so full of angsty, smutty goodness!
I also adore how Itachi is just so slightly deranged. Well, I would be too if I'd been pining after my nonexistent younger brother for years...
| NeedBackUpNoI'mTheAkatsuki chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
I love this fic! It's one of my favorites and I read it alot XD!
| Veja24 chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
I enjoyed reading your story :) The first kiss was so magical... Sasuke however, should have remained a bit more defiant. It's just more fun that way :P