|Reviews for Untitled|
| nataliiee-louise chapter 2 . 11/27/2009
I LARVE THIS STORY TBH!
UPDATE SOON PLZZ!
| HDCullen chapter 2 . 3/28/2009
| sailorjupiterox chapter 2 . 12/28/2008
ZOMG. I. WANT. MORE!
| Rutilus luna chapter 2 . 12/8/2008
um yeah why haven't Jayson smelled bella if his a new born?
| S.L. Michaels chapter 2 . 9/26/2007
Aww! Yay for Rosalie.
Good chapter. I can't wait for you to get to the good stuff ]
| littlegirlwolf chapter 2 . 9/26/2007
Cute but short chapters.
| ReaderRabid chapter 2 . 9/25/2007
wow - a story where *Rosalie* gets a child? That's really cool, and something I haven't seen before.
It might be helpful if the story had a title, though. And if you tell us when the story is set, that will help us understand why Bella & Edward have to stay behind - I'm guessing this isn't post-Eclipse?
I'm very interested to find out what happens next with Jayson and the Cullens.
| 4Edward's-Eyes-Only chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
Strange...but I like it
| S.L. Michaels chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
I mean..umm.. update soon?
| littlegirlwolf chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
That was soo cool! Keep writing!
| Trippix chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
Ooh, am I the first reviewer? Awesome! This was great, but I think you may want keep your eyes open for typos and such, but the plot was good, an I hope to read more. Maybe a longer chapter next time?
| arisaswordheart chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
Err... Interesting idea... but weird all the same...