Reviews for Untitled
nataliiee-louise chapter 2 . 11/27/2009
WOWZA!

I LARVE THIS STORY TBH!

UPDATE SOON PLZZ!
HDCullen chapter 2 . 3/28/2009
W-W-w-WOW
sailorjupiterox chapter 2 . 12/28/2008
ZOMG. I. WANT. MORE!
Rutilus luna chapter 2 . 12/8/2008
um yeah why haven't Jayson smelled bella if his a new born?
S.L. Michaels chapter 2 . 9/26/2007
Aww! Yay for Rosalie.

Good chapter. I can't wait for you to get to the good stuff ]
littlegirlwolf chapter 2 . 9/26/2007
Cute but short chapters.
ReaderRabid chapter 2 . 9/25/2007
wow - a story where *Rosalie* gets a child? That's really cool, and something I haven't seen before.

It might be helpful if the story had a title, though. And if you tell us when the story is set, that will help us understand why Bella & Edward have to stay behind - I'm guessing this isn't post-Eclipse?

I'm very interested to find out what happens next with Jayson and the Cullens.
4Edward's-Eyes-Only chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
Strange...but I like it
S.L. Michaels chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
CONTINUE!

*sheepish grin*

I mean..umm.. update soon?
littlegirlwolf chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
That was soo cool! Keep writing!
Trippix chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
Ooh, am I the first reviewer? Awesome! This was great, but I think you may want keep your eyes open for typos and such, but the plot was good, an I hope to read more. Maybe a longer chapter next time?
arisaswordheart chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
Err... Interesting idea... but weird all the same...

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