Reviews for Discovery
xxLemmiexx chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
I loved it! 33 lol I loved the end! XD
souh chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
30 seconds away and im SURE they enjoyed it! perv!lol this was one of the more odd sex scenes ive read but hell if it was hot! just THINK of what bee can do with those big fingers of his.../drool! *shiver* thats m oh yeah...I WANNA RIDE THE BEE NEXT! 8D
Joyfull Scroll chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
Hm now that was one nice lemon! Don't see to many of these types. With Bee in his Bipedal form, or even rarer in his car form!

Still very enjoyable to read! Found the ending rather funny! I'm sure the other Autobots already know what may have went on between them! lol
Cr4ZyFr0G100 chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
I LOVE the ending. That was cute, but I didn't get the sex. I hope you didn't get any flames for writing this. Now, if i was reading a different one shot, I'd be pretty damn pissed cuz it's kinda short for me, but this was amazing. I love what they were doing in the begining and I love how ou didn't use slang for Bumblebee, like, you made him talk likea robot... If that makes any sense..

Anywho, great story, write another one ja?
BADDdrowning-lilly chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
OMG! I read this and... and...

I really liked it. XD Especially the end.



"The other autobots are 30 seconds away from where we are."


That is priceless!
LittleMewLugia chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
Thsat was seriously hot and beautifully tender.

And then the second-to last line made it highly amusing as well.

Kudos to you!

InvaderLii chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
Awsomeness! yay for sparksmut!
gorillazgurl 4Life chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
Wow... :)
The 'Blur' Witch chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
nice (THumbs up)
Datte Kohaku chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
I read it on the LJ comm BeexSam. Not sur eif i commented there but
Cazcatharsis chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
hahahahah, mad rush to clean up and look innocent...