Reviews for Without You
Rika100 chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
aww poor Har and Sev, nice ending though. _
readingReality chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
this was really good
kitcat19us chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
good story!
Missy Padfoot chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
Aw, thats brilliant.


Missy Padfoot
Mouse Kaiser chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
Had to read this before I read All I Need Is You, I loved it.
Bear-Bell chapter 9 . 10/6/2007
You kind of need to work on making a chapter more than three sentences long.

You also need to work on making a chapter that has actual paragraphs, instead of just one sentence after the other.
Angel of Immortality chapter 8 . 9/30/2007
Please, write the sequel first then afterwards write the prequel. Thanks!
YaoiGurlPeepinTom chapter 8 . 9/30/2007
Aw! How cute! Tho I wish the chappies had been longer, but how kawaii!
Holen-Snape chapter 8 . 9/30/2007
I would like to read both a Prequel and a Sequel if I have to choose just one I would pick the sequel. thank you
FlamesofaPheonix chapter 8 . 9/30/2007
oh... i think you should write a sequel and a prequel! the first couple chapters were pretty short, but i really liked this story! :)
always-alone-but-never-alone chapter 8 . 9/29/2007
thats it!
Good Witch chapter 8 . 9/29/2007
I think a sequel should be written. It's a good story, but a little short.
T-TrainOrTurkeyT chapter 8 . 9/29/2007
Good chap! I wouldn't mind seeing either prequel or sequel. I think either one would be quite interesting.
Abii-Potter chapter 8 . 9/29/2007
its great man u out did yourself. its fabulous,hey make a prequel puppy dog eyes and a kiss to u with sevs permission for doing so ofcource.
Nocturnalhuntress chapter 8 . 9/28/2007
Please write the prequel and the sequel. I really like your writing style.
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