|Reviews for the bid|
| kittylover529 chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
| Zac3fronluver chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
LUV THIS TORY
| jUztafAn chapter 1 . 9/23/2007
AWW! THAT WAS SO CUTE! I LOVE IT! Great job! we got bidding contest like that but it's the girls who bid to a boy she like, not in school but in our district, it was so fun! I LOVE THIS STORY! Keep writing!
| account002 chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
No offense, but it would not hurt to brush up on your capitalization skills. I hope you aren't ten years old or something. That would be terrible.
Oh yeah, and another tip: show us, don't tell us.