You're making me cry, Author-San! Heartbreakingly awesome!

beautiful

That sword and the end of Naruto’s book has quite the bit of foreshadowing.

I love the story within the story within the story (Naruto’s book). That sounds like a great novel 10/10.

Most Good story. Good work on the story.

I enjoyed the story. The book is good idas. It is bittersweet end. Great work on the story.

Came in for some quick lovely dovely and a possible lime ans got away with almost tears in my eyes, thanks really liked it

Second reason!

Still as good as I remember. great fic

I'm not sure if Doki Doki Fantasy's plot was based on a real book, but it's amazing

The best Naruto fanfic I read this year

For those asking the Doki Doki fantasy is based of the anime Neon Genesis Evangelion

Honestly, the only thing missing is Jiraiya's reaction to Naruto's book, I mean the one that would be his first published book.

That, and geez, that ending came out fast, it almost seemed like a parody for a moment

That was beautiful, and really well written.

Is the story of Doki Doki Paradise inspired by a real manga/novel/other? Cause it looks like an award-winning novel in the making.

I never thought I would like narusaku so much. This was so sad ya know? And the novel Naruto wrote? It was really awesome. I would love to see a whole book outta it. Thanks.