J'aime c'est beau.

Wow that was amazing.

this made me cryit's to beautiful

eleven years has passed. Yet you still manage to destroy my already mangled heart.

That was a fucking sad story. I loved it, but I hate sad stories.

That got me right in the heart. Beautiful story though.

oh man i hadn't cried like that in a long time but i still loved it. It was a great love story

you monster, the lowest depths of hell would spit you back out in disgust at what you've done here. Have you no shame? have you no morals? how could you possibly sleep at night? needless to say you earned this favorite

Damn it I thought this was going to be funny!

It was beautiful how you crafted this story and expressed Naruto’s feelings. I loved it.

God, this story... The summary made me think this was going to be funny! Funny, I tell you! Now I've got tears in my eyes D: But damn, it was so beautiful. It started out so normal, too, nothing that would make me expect that it was going to lead to this ending... I did wonder why Naruto was suddenly wearing glasses, but I just thought that the author probably thought that he would be hotter or look more writer-y if he wore glasses- so wrong, I was so wrong. It actually had a reason. With the thing on his wrist, I had expected that it would play a role, but I could never have foreseen... /this/. So, it started out light and normal. Then came the story within the story, which was truly heartbreaking. That made the whole thing sadder already, especially when Naruto went into battle with Itachi alone and I really expected that he would die/Sakura would save him just at the last moment. But then he actually came back! Without any trouble, and I was quite a bit thrown off before thinking that you did that quite nicely, because it was a nice twist, and besides, Naruto was alive- Until came the revelation, of course. Ouch. That was... It explained so much, but then their conversation, and Naruto pushing Sakura to Sasuke, and, and- I'm just at a loss for words. This just squeezed my heart, and the fact that I went in totally not expecting something like this... It was beautiful, I really liked it. I liked Ino and Shikamaru very much, too, by the way. This is going in my favorites :)
Thank you very much for writing this, I loved it, and keep writing! ! !

I just have to say what a beautiful piece of work. The story was incredible, and also the story about the train is so beautiful I cried. Thank you for writing this, it’s such a beautiful story. Especially the train story.

I just started crying. Actual tears falling down my cheeks. And I’m not even a fan of ‘Naruto’. Damn it.

I expected something else at the beginning, for the love of all the gods I know about this story broke my heart and the worse part is that I can honestly see NAruto willing to sacrifice his life for someone else that way.

A lot of times in canon Naruto seemed to not care about his life and had low self-esteem even if he was always cheerful. I am just sad that no one noticed that in canon.

This the best one-shot I read and I doubt I will find a better one.

Damn ninjas cutting onions! Right on the feels. Best one shot i have ever read. Sad that you are not writing anymore