Not where i expected this to go when I started

Sad that naruto have to die

Nice touch, Sakura's daughter having the same name as Naruto's pen name.

this is so great!
I actually cried! what a master piece!
story within story, doki doki fantasy was awesome!
it hooked me to the story oh so emotionally..
double thumbs up for u!
I really hope you write again!
i can't find story this magnificent so far..

thank u for writing man!

Excellent work. Really well done!

love this story, all that i can say..

man I can't believe u killed off Naruto for that pathetic loser Sasgay still a great story nicely written some angsty moments of course but also some cool moments just sux it ended with his death kind of ironic kind of Sakura's fault also in a way if she'd have told him earlier he wouldn't have died

this is an amazing one shot. bravo

Amazing story. Loved everything about it. Great work.

The ending before the epilogue was a tad bit rushed, but other than that, this is one of the finest fanfic I've read.

GOD FUCKING DAMMIT! whyyyyyyy help meeeee! I'm crying why must you do this to me! whyyyyyyyy!

This is the best fanfition I have read in ages; it was so beautiful. Like a magic spell was cast over me and I was sent to the Naruto world to see it all happen. It was so beautiful thank you for making something so beautiful and sharing so people can read this masterpiece.

Man why you gotta make me cry like this ?
Damn it all to hell .

That was good not many can equal the emotion

You bastard I hope ur happy for making all of us cry like this