Reviews for Hellfire
elleelle chapter 8 . 7/13/2013
This really needs its own story with multiple chapters.
Kitsune1818 chapter 16 . 5/1/2012
I love the chapter 8 -Rebirth-, that can be a great multichapter fic. This is a great collection, really nice job.
Teefarino chapter 16 . 12/2/2011
I am SURE that Zuko loves Azula. Even though he just stood there when she was having her breakdown. I don't think he's a physical touch kind of person; I think his mind was just completely blown away by the idea that his superior, kick-ass sister was now freaking out like this. I am sure that that incident scarred him emotionally forever. :D Yay angst

ANYWAY. I enjoyed these various Zucest-y one-shots (from years and years ago, lol), and just thought you should know!

Teefarino chapter 4 . 12/2/2011
I know you wrote this YEARS ago, but I just wanted to say that damn I am enjoying these Zucest fics. :) Coming across multiple fics all together like this is pretty much a dream come true. Lol. Just had to let you know! :) On I go to the next one!

nolongerbeating88 chapter 16 . 9/20/2011
add more please
Elviol vi Yogyakarta chapter 16 . 2/7/2010
wow... i really can't say anything...

yeah i know i am like... what? 3 years late? hahaha

i just recently entered this fandom and immediately like this pairing. and after all zucest fict that i read in FF archive. i could say that this drabbles of yours is the best of them...

and i noticed that some of your chapters would turn out good if someone develop it to a multi-chapter story...

well... this is what you get from being 3 years late into some fandom... hahaha

Hope to see your other works soon...


Elviol vi Yogyakarta
pagelupin chapter 16 . 10/9/2009
Wow. This was great. I love all the little drabbles, they're all great. Thank you for posting this. _
Darkfire chapter 16 . 2/16/2009
Awesome drabbles. They're all very detailed and emotional. Zucest is a complicated pairing for obvious reasons and you did a great job at showing different ways how the relationship works. A very well written fanfic.

zutarababe chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
that was good! i wish there were more zuki n zucest fics... :(
Undead American chapter 13 . 1/2/2009
I read all your vignettes in the course of the last week. Very good stuff!
Kismet's Kiss chapter 16 . 10/14/2008
Lovely end, really.

but i haven't seen the ending yet and your hatred to it, doesn't make me feel inclined to do SO XD
Anesther chapter 16 . 10/9/2008
So I wasn't the only one who was thoroughly disappointed in Azula's insanity. That's good to hear.

She always seemed like such a strong and confident character, that it practically tore at me to see that she was reduced to such a pitiful, sniveling creature. Makes me mad. Clearly no one took into account how the Azula fans would react. Yes, her going "crazy" is probable-very likely even-but no one likes to see it being done.

But this had at least something to look at-not like the way the animators did it; having Zuko ask about his MOTHER-we know she's dead already!-and leaving us to question where the heck Azula was being contained; that's not too much to ask is it? -shakes head-

I'm happy that Mai ended up with Zuko-'cause she's one of favourite females in A:TLA-but my Zucest side still felt slightly melancholy about the whole thing. Nickelodean wouldn't have gone through with it anyway, much to our dismay, even if we begged, but this had a...decent goodness: Azula just has to sleep.

Point to be said: This IS a wonderful Zucest story! No doubt about it, because it opened my mind, kept me wanting for more, and it was just refreshing to see something so original involving the siblings of the Fire Lord. Great, great, great work Forlorn Maiden. I'll be waiting for further Zucest from you-Sokkla too...and the inspirations you might add to this. ;D

Anesther chapter 15 . 10/9/2008

I was so happy to see that this was up, I practically shouted, "Hell yes!" to the world.

Now, there's just one more...
badkidoh chapter 15 . 10/9/2008
nice work on 15 & 16.
Luiz4200 chapter 16 . 10/9/2008
Good ones. Please update.
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