Reviews for Dance with me
SilverToMo chapter 3 . 8/20
I like this, too bad you stopped. Are you ever coming back? The writing (grammar) needs a tiny bit of work. Where were you wanting to go with this? Has it been adopted or is it up for adoption? Cliffies make my brain work too many scenarios.
Tammiechan chapter 3 . 4/30
PLEASE UPDATE. THIS WAS LOVELY
Darklightning843 chapter 3 . 2/17
W...Where are the next chapters? I need more of this... It's so sweet, the story gave me a kind of completed feeling if you understand. A nice sweet, sad love story / :)
fap2hentai6969 chapter 3 . 1/1
I'M NOT CRYING! IT'S THE ONIONS I SWEAR!
KiraK.chan chapter 3 . 12/13/2015
UM NO U CANT END THIS HERE EXCUSE ME
Tegan chapter 3 . 12/8/2015
What happened to him?! Please write more as it is such a beautiful story.
gingerpro chapter 3 . 10/27/2015
i'm assuming what happened and it almost made me cry but there is potential to add on more chapters which would be awesome and not kill off Naruto but somehow he miraculously survives.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/12/2015
Continue it please
Mirage chapter 3 . 9/23/2015
aww no why stop here...
what happened was it to much exercise...was he to tired, did he sleep, unconcious...what...
please come back one day and write more chaps and an end to this story
its now 2015
Guest chapter 3 . 7/20/2015
Please complete the story... It sounds so promising and has a great amount of potential .
streetfihhtersabrina chapter 3 . 7/19/2015
What happens to naruto, a must know, want to read more
jupimako chapter 3 . 5/18/2015
Sweet but tragic.
Evangeline039 chapter 3 . 4/14/2015
Nooooo! Don't leave it on the cliffhanger! Please update soon! Don't let the curiosity killed me! Please? *puppy eyes*
cassie chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
That's not true. I love your stories.
qvteckluv chapter 3 . 10/8/2014
No matter how many times I read this, I still cry.
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