|Reviews for Mesmerizing Gaze|
| ririi69 chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
I just made account so I think the very FIRST C&B story should be first which I reviewed ;)
I love it, amazing.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
first C&B-WOW and great!
| ellibells chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
That was really good :) loved it!
| katiedv chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
I loved it Cami. I hope to read more from you soon :)
| Blood Red Kiss of Death chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
I like looking at the date of when this was posted. I didn't actually think about BC romantically until V/V. But, I did enjoy their friendship since the pilot.
This was an adorable, hot piece of work.
| RedCloud13 chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
really good bur it seems like it needs more
it doesn't seem finished you know?
| TheMusicLives chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
Okay, so I have read this before. :look: I just didn't review.
I liked it a lot. :nod: You did pretty well, first time writing the characters and not beta'd.
One thing that I struggled with a little was word choice. There were some awkward choices where another word would have fit better. I had to kinda go, "well, she probably meant THIS instead," which meant I had to re-read a paragraph and insert the word I thought went there. While there are a lot of great words in here, some of them just didn't quite fit.
I love this idea, though. Her needing release and going to him to find it. The morning after was actually quite perfect in that he would act emotionless and pervy if it was obvious she wanted to get the f*ck out of there. :lol:
The bittersweet ending really got me though. If she let him REALLY kiss her, she would have ended up staying. This is the way they'll always be, I think. If they break up, there will always be one of these moments where they know they'll be unable to stand the distance between them any longer. After the first encounter, they'll always be back for more.
Great stuff, adding to my favorites if it's not already there. :lol:
| annablake chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
Wow, this must be one of the first (THE first?) B/C fanfics like ever. Fantastic.
I was looking for another fanfic of yours here, "Right in front of you", but didn't find it. Loved that one as well. (Am too lazy to get an acount in order to review at Raging Butterflies...)
Keep up the good work!
| L.Lockheart chapter 1 . 1/26/2008
when he pulled her waist though he was still sleeping - i loved that most
he can be sweet when he's not awake :)
| princetongirl chapter 1 . 12/4/2007
loved it update soon
| D chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
ah great job,
| emily chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
The best C/B I've read yet. Chuck is perfect, so in character.
| AutumnSoleil chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
I loved it, i think it could be a great fic if you decided to continue!
| Irish-Chick13 chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
You should write a sequel or something. This was really good! You are a great writer! I cannot wait to read more of your work!
| 0xsammie chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
great one-shot i don't think it's NC-17, though. nice writing ]