Reviews for Hormonal Imbalance
Skywroe chapter 5 . 8/19
That was stupid. Albus has no right to force Harry to do anything. He isn't a student anymore and doesn't need to do anything he doesn't want to do or feel safe to do. And also who sits up on another persons chest? That just seems unrealistic to me.

I really tried to read the story to identify some good points, but it just kept making me mad.

Harry was acting like a student again and didn't he have a job? Why wasn't he working and staying in the castle?
YetAnotherJanewayFan chapter 1 . 1/21
is this unedited anywhere? I'm not getting into it if it isn't.
delia cerrano chapter 17 . 1/31/2014
Pretty realistic in the hormonal-depression parts. Enjoyed it.
phoenixgirl26 chapter 4 . 11/5/2013
I couldn't stop laughing, imagining snape feeling up mcgonagall, hilarius, great story.
Karpat chapter 7 . 2/27/2013
Haha, Förvalta för Magi... Um, seriously, don't use online translators, they're hardly ever correct. Förvalta means 'to manage, to conduct, to administer' (I'm guessing that last one is where the translator messed up.

Minister for Magic would be best translated as 'The Magiminister' or 'Magiministern' (when without the 'the'), but really, when the Swedish Prime Minister is talked about in english his title is translated, so why wouldn't the magical one be? Using the Swedish title is just confusing.
SpiderRealm chapter 10 . 9/10/2012
*grins* So...Harry's baby came out of his ass? Or did a birth canal open up somehow?

And finally, the baby is here! :D
SpiderRealm chapter 9 . 9/10/2012
*grins* That was of Severus to stay with Harry instead of going back to the lab! :D

I can't wait until the baby is born! :DD
SpiderRealm chapter 8 . 9/10/2012
*grins* Oh, wow I can't believe he threw a tome at Severus! xD
SpiderRealm chapter 7 . 9/10/2012
*grins* Oh wow, that was funny! xD
SpiderRealm chapter 6 . 9/10/2012
*grins* Ohhh, I wonder what he's planning! *snickers*
SpiderRealm chapter 5 . 9/10/2012
*grins* Dude, the prank on the Gryffindors just game me an idea on my first one-shot! Thank you! :DD
SpiderRealm chapter 4 . 9/10/2012
*snickers* Poor Severus felt did you put it?...slightly sagging breasts! xDD

Oh wait, the image that popped up in my head doesn't look so bad...but it was Minerva and Severus is married to SEVERUS! *cackles*
SpiderRealm chapter 3 . 9/10/2012
*gasps for breath* That has always been on my mind! I'm always imagining someone having a surf board and someone calls their name and they turn around and end up hitting the person next to them on the back of the head! xDD It always make me laugh even though my mind just came up with the image! xDD
SpiderRealm chapter 2 . 9/10/2012
*snickers* Poor Minerva! She'll never be able to show her face again! Although, she is a Gryffindor, so she'll probably suck up all her courage and face the crowds...after the event have died down from people's mind! *grins*

I wonder what Harry have planned next! xD
SpiderRealm chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
*grins* I love Mpreg stories and I can't wait until the hell that will rise in Hogwarts once Harry start having pregnacy hormones! *cackles excitedly*
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