|Reviews for Ayla and Katarina|
| Ithilya chapter 26 . 11/8/2008
Aww, loved it :D
| TheLighthouseKeeper chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
I love this story!
Very well written.
| vampirediva07 chapter 26 . 8/7/2008
Don...wonderful opinion...hahahaha...that's freaking hilarious. I'm still rolling on the floor with laughter. If you're such a chicken to not say where your writing account is, that just proves you are afraid of what I might say to something you have to write. But, if you're such a pansy, then that's your "God-given" right to be one. At least troyfan16 has the courage to write something and put it out there, despite what others say.
So, to troyfan16, great way to end the story and I love it. You keep up the awesome work writing your stories and I'll continue to read them and review.
| DonStyles chapter 26 . 7/31/2008
Thank God. An end to this debauched fiasco.
I had to laugh at Vampirediva07's reply.
Dear, it was not a flame I wrote, it was my wonderful opinion. Mary Sue's are not original - take it up with the Battling Bard if you are still in ignorant denial. As for my own writing skills, ahem, I have a reviewing account on here and yes, I do write and where my stuff is, I'm not likely going to tell you :D
#Don - gets out Ale to toast the end of this 26 chaptered piece of talentless waffle.
| SilverLight05 chapter 26 . 7/31/2008
LOL I hope you can update soon!
| Rodidor chapter 26 . 7/30/2008
THAT ENDING WAS ABSOLUTELY AHDORABLE
| vampirediva07 chapter 25 . 7/2/2008
In response to Don's flame...
You, sir, are a moron. This story is probably more original than anything you could ever come up with in your pathetic excuse for a brain. You try writing something original and then we'll talk. So, when you're ready to write something worth my time to read, then we'll talk about your own "writing skills" and how lame they are.
| DonStyles chapter 25 . 6/30/2008
Congratulations, you've created your first ever masterpiece of S.H.I.T.E.
What the hell is this?
I see you've got your army of fangirls behind you, so I expect half of them are going to turn on me for posting my god-given comments.
Literally, your story is a bore.
Uncreative due to lack of description.
And full of repititive dialogue.
And of course, forgive me for not saying this first, Mary Sue's.
Ayla and Katarina are as interesting as a funeral service.
And thank you for indentifying them so clearly in your title, so it gives decent writers a prewarning to turn away from your toxic, pathetic, excuse of a story.
| Curious chapter 6 . 6/26/2008
This is a bit off-topic, but why is the chapter called Katarina Does Tricks when it's about Ayla?
Other than that, awesome chapter. Love it.
| SilverLight05 chapter 25 . 6/22/2008
LOL, love it! I can't wait for you to update! I just can't believe that it's almost ending!
| Rodidor chapter 25 . 6/20/2008
i luved it very amusing...and heart warming
| cuteepiee1 chapter 25 . 6/20/2008
lol cant wait for the next chapter. this one was great.
| Rodidor chapter 24 . 6/3/2008
great chapyter i hope update really soon
| SilverLight05 chapter 24 . 6/2/2008
They're gonna fight and their husband's are going to kill them after the fight is over, aren't they? Please update soon!
| mysterious victoria chapter 24 . 6/2/2008
OK, you have me confused. Dagonet is alive? And Irelyn Grace and Clair both had the same dream about him dying on the lake, which actually happens in the movie? If that's true that's pretty crazy . . . anyway. This next chap is going to be a lot of arguing right? I got the feeling it will be since the two lovers of the two men who might die will go to war right to start off. Great even though it was a short chapter.
Mysterious Victoria :)