Reviews for On Out of the Tunnel Vision
floating on clouds above chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
One of my favorite stories of yours! :)
zunaira ghazal chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
huh. cute :)
Melitza chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Very lovely. You have a "by the by" way of telling a story - short and simple, yet still able to pull at the heart strings. The mundane setting of the build up just makes it all that much more believable, not at all like the overdone, overly melodramatic stories that others have.

I would, however, love to see a longer story about this couple from you. Maybe you have one on your profile - I don't know. I'll keep browsing through and enjoying. _
ShinobiOfTheDarkness chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
'hello there, you can't see me' was me. I was too lazy to login before. Sorry, it was awesome though, came back to favourite (-smile-)
hello there you can't see me chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
that was very good, incredibly well written, very deep (-bows-) you're good

~hello there, you can't see me~
frumpyrox chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
lol, wow, pretty good. but how can they really be so sure wat theyre feeling isnt just lust if theyre totally wasted..? still, nice job.

happy unbirthday

DreamsXReality chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
umm...rated M, mmk?

Good fic, lovely plot line, very individual...rather short, but very sexy ;-)

again, I strongly suggest that you change the rating.
jollyrancher6250 chapter 1 . 9/23/2007
oh... I sense something not ending well... Anyway, very sweet haha