Reviews for Nerves
WhatTheValhalla chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
Okay so before you read this, I have to warn you that I'm not going to sugar coat this, so if you don't want honestly, you should probably stop reading now.

Okay first of all, for an opening chapter of your first fanfic, it was pretty good, if a little boring. The dialogue (the bits where people were talking) felt a bit stiff, and which characterisation can be difficult when writing someone else's character, you're well on your way to getting there, and you'll only get better as you practice.

Other than that, it seemed pretty good, although not particularly canon compliant, (as in, John would never have been 'chatty' with the parent of Dean's friend (girlfriend)) it was a great first attempt, and it's obvious that you do have some natural talent, you'll just have to work at it a bit to perfect it
2People chapter 15 . 3/2/2011
Great story dude, I like your writing style. You write Dean-fiction really well for a straight guy lol.

From Tia of 2people.
Fhyre.N.Ice chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Dude this story is so awesome! i love it!
s2 dean alec jensen chapter 15 . 7/14/2009
yay! It worked out well. LOve this fic! I liked but was on the edge of seat. Oh no! She went evil, then back to normal! Aw! There were typos here and there. I liked every chapter, the events in the story flowed nicely and you didn't jump to other parts. You labelled it , I think.

Yay!
Emberseve chapter 15 . 9/30/2007
Sorry it took me awhile to review...I've been getting LOADS of story alerts... Anyways, I loved the rest of the story! The ending was REALLY CUTE! NOW I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL!

- Emberseve
alwaysateen chapter 13 . 9/28/2007
Hey,

I just want to let you know that I stop reading your story.

Don't get me wrong, you started really well, with an interesting subject but in the latest chapters, it looked like you didn't know what to do to keep our interests.

When you brought Jo and Ellen into the mix, everything didn't make sense anymore.

And now Michelle is back? That's too much for me.

Anyway, I wanted to explain my decision, hope you understand.
fantasymonroe chapter 15 . 9/28/2007
Wow! Brilliant as usual i love the end part Dean was so sweet to write that bless him lol Love this story Your a brill author/writer after this story i certainly can't wait to read more of your stuff :) Fantastic love it 100% thanks :P
Billabong680 chapter 15 . 9/27/2007
I really just can't wait to read the sequel! I think the fact that I'm studying next to my computer just to see if you update is a give away about how addicted I was to your fanfic lol

I just can't wait to see what'll the sequel will be about
AquarianNightSky chapter 14 . 9/27/2007
Hm...very interesting twists so far. Keep it up.

Toodles!

Sky
FireZombie chapter 15 . 9/27/2007
I love me some aussie smiles. Good idea putting that song part in. Very nice touch.
Shezzi chapter 15 . 9/27/2007
cool! i'm gonna look that song up on you tube, it sounds really good...so is she evil or not? who knows? has dean said christo? will we find out? anyways i'm at work i gotta go! love xx
Shezzi chapter 14 . 9/27/2007
i like it, i like it a lot...very very tricky! well written, just like the rest of it...boy you're fast, you must type faster than me...and that's saying something! love xx
FireZombie chapter 14 . 9/27/2007
And here I thought you killed everyone. Not that I would of minded if Jo died, but damn. She didn't. Good chapter though and I really enjoy the story.
Billabong680 chapter 14 . 9/27/2007
Oh ! I didn't even noticed you updated lol You update too fast(that's good) Anyway, I just can't wait to read more (and sorry for the shortness of this review, but my mother is calling me to do the dishes so... )
Billabong680 chapter 13 . 9/27/2007
Michelle's a demon ? O.o Poor Dean... He should have know that bringing people back from the dead is dangerous. Nothing is gain without a price...

Anyway, great update and now I just can't wait until next chapter. Dean is gonna feel so guilty about it...
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