Great story so far. I really hope you will come back and finish it.

I really wish this novel was continued to completion, the whole plot and characters introduced are such a breath of fresh air that it's such an utter shame that it has ended here.

sure hundreds told you but still not corrected occamancey protects

I loved this story, and thank you for writing it.

Wow! I am so invested in this story. I pray it is not abandoned. Thank you.

Hey, what happened to telling Harry about the SGC and what they do there? As I understood what you wrote, George gave permission already.

Leaving Harry in the dark is so going to bite them in the butt, I just know it!

Wait, Amelia found him as he was leaving Sarah's? Well thanks to Shack, Dumbles won't be far behind, I'll bet. Grrrrr

Well drat, I am VERY disappointed in Hermione. Grrrrrrrrr Molly seems to be too stupid to see what is plainly spelled out in simple terms, I'm wondering if a two by four will become necessary!

Oh dear, who is coming through the gate?

I'm so very proud of Ron for standing up to and confronting Dumbles like that, very brave of him. Did he figure all of that out on his own or did Hermione help? What about the twins? Why did Hermione remain silent? Is she afraid Dumbles will sacrifice her and her family to Voldemort? I wouldn't put it past the man! I hope she and her family flee Britain!

Heh, so Jack exposed Dudley's new career, huh? That'll put paid to Vernon and Petunia, I guess, but what about Marge?

Wait a minute, Mooney was part of the group that investigated the train, confirming that Harry HAD been there and the Harry the other kids shared a compartment with had NOT been a polyjuiced imposter. So I'm confused, whee is Mooney now?

I just got the most wonderfully disturbing visual of Jack and Janet torturing the Dursley's, together as a team. I hope Jack didn't forget dear old Marge in this revenge, along with her horrible dog that should be put down because of how she trained it! Grrrrrrrrr

*shrieking with laughter* oh my gosh, that was hilarious!

There is NOBODY better than Jack to have been Sirius in a past life. He can take everything Black lived through and SEE all the crap Dumbles has been shoveling and I hope he gets the chance to shoot the old goat!

Ooh, famous last words, George! I'm betting the General should not have tempted fate like that.

LOL

Yaaaaayyy, Jack DOES have Harry! But for how long?