Loved the story. Great writing style! The plot points and characterizations where really good also. I don't recall seeing any other story with a smart Ron before, it was well done. I hope this story continues! :))))

Harry accused Jack of using Occlumency to gain the Christmas knowledge. I guess you meant Legilimency. Or was that you having Harry be ignorent?

Are you going to continue this story. Please, say yes.

Oh boy...I can feel the chaos coming.

Not sure if I have commented earlier in that cause my apology. I love these cross-overs but something is bothering me and that is how Ron and Hermione are projected. Ron is
Møre like Hermione and Hermione is more how she was in first and second year.

Now I sww in this chapter you are hinted that both were external inflicted as most of the school. As Hermione is fierce loyaal of Harry first it looks moody is triggering her loyality by letting her think on the situation.

Still it an good story! With regard,

Thorney and Millbank. Snerk. Not even James Bond was that circumspect.

shit fic don't read

I have enjoyed your story. I would like to know what Jake/Sirius has planned to do to Dumbledor when he shows up.
I hope you will continue with your story. I'm wondering what kind of trouble finds Harry, as usual.
Thank You for your story.

please update again soon!

Love this story. Unusual to see Ron not trusting Dumbledore where Hermione does. Love it!

Can't wait to read more

great to see movement on this. dare we hope for more or a trend in writing

Love it!
Can't wait for more!

A good story and I WANT MORE!

I am so glad to see an update for this story!
Your supposition about the letter tampering makes so much sense! Always wondered why there wasn't more uproar from parents about events in at Hogwarts.
But I have to admit I don't understand what went on between Moody and Hermione.
And I'm not sure about the last scene, but have hopes the next update will clue me in!
Thank you Greatly for adding to this intriguing tale!

I really want to know what happens next.