Reviews for With Age
Vannahlove chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
well ive read all your moonchild fics, this being the last one and i must say i really love them they're short but they have enough detail and this fic particularly is just...heart fluttery i hope you continue to write them and possibly make a multi chapter fic
0928soubi at chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
I especially like when Sho is drunk. XD I love the last line! It's so perfect.
Candy Apple Heart Attack chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
Yay! Sexy snippets!

*Mocks Kei's English* Good job!
Rulisu chapter 1 . 12/25/2008
This was more moving and heartbreaking than the actual movie.

Incredible on all levels.

Simplisticly beautiful and tasteful, though sensual.

Your portrayal of Sho and Kei was perfect.

Really, the whole thing was beautiful. I'm definately in love with your writing style!
Micuko chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
wow, awesome, loved it so much
lisa101 chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
In my oppinion, this an okay story for such a short one. Ot was good.

I think that you could probably -if you wanted to that is- make each individual section into a chapter with more detail.

And if you consider that, you mught want to consider changing the end. Make them live instead of die.

If you did that it would definately be something.

Not here anymore please go awa chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
i LOVE it, it fits the original plot of the movie so well unlike alot of others for this pairing.
Fang500 chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
That's how it should have been! That's how they should have made the movie...through out the whole movie I was like "Come on Kiss already!" lol I really liked this
Kim chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
Awesome story D
CloudxKadajLover chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
Aw! : D That was absolutely lovely! I loved it! Great job!
Alchemist of the Flame chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
Wow, I absolutely love this. It's amazing!
ZiggyVanWagner chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
I'm glad your fanfiction was the first one for me to read after just watching the movie. They were in character, there was love, there was blood. I think, if I had read another's, I would have lost the impression of perfection for these two.

I'm not a fan of either man's music, but they did well as actors. Well, nanite.
Moon Child For Life chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
The ending made me want to cry. I don't like the end of the film though coz it makes me cry as well but this is a fantastic story sweetie. _
Liminix chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
Wow, that was amazing! Especially the "Sho was..." thing.

Very cleverly done.
AlbeeDarling chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
oh that was really great! i loved the way you wrote their relationship's steady shift from tentative interest to admiration to comraderey to love. it was really nicely done. i like it

darn it! why did they have to die! lol im still mad at the movie for that haha but i loves them anyway! XD
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