Was I s'posed to find this funny. 'Cause I did! haha! i'm evil...

wow. talk about OOC. but I did wonder what happen to his pormise - I can't imagine Lord of the Night Court NOT finding out who told Kaye...

so, overall, good job.

luv2read

Hm. You capture a lot with this. At first I was uncertain, but you wrap things up nicely with the last line, and I realized that nothing was OOC. It was actually fitting - because of that last line. Nice work.

Fabulous! Few are able to capture the ways of the Unseelie Court, and you've done a great job!

dark...and creepy...

hm...yeah, what would Kaye think?(the world may never know)

That was really good! Most of the Holly Black ff that people write is really ooc and mushy. They never seem to really capture the darker side of the fey. You are a really gifted writer! I loved every word of it and I hope that you keep writing!

woa - morbid roiben. hehe. loved it!

Oh. Roiben's a badass. Loved it!

You know, as pissed as he was, I doubt he'd have two faeries killed off because of that. But whatever, your fic, not mine.

~*~Mystic~*~

Perfect!

~Chip

Ahh. Lovely. And no, I did not mean that sarcastically. I always wondered what happened to that whole bit in the story. It seemed to get lost in all the meaningless, convoluted crap. I can totally imagine him doing something like this behind her back...Maybe I'll keep my eye on you, too...

Good one, I enjoyed it. Always wondered whether Roiben did ever get down to finding the people who put that idea in Kaye's head. And I think you did a good job bringing out the darker side of Roiben.

Pretty good story that. Roiben wasn't THAT ooc. I could see him having the two feys heads cut off.