|Reviews for Break the ice|
| TwinkieMonster chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
I LOVE this story! I've got to admit though, there were a couple points where I wanted to smack Ed, so that means you're good a writing.
| meladi1 chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
I HAVE COOKIES RIGHT NOW. seriously i have. so sweet this story was.
| FallenHope-Angel chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
This was uber sweet. Ed opened up to Roy and everything is okay again.
| xXTheDragonRiderXx chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
"Then it might be a little hard to understand… but siblings get at fights at times. Random ones, you know. Like if you don't like something the other one does and try to point it out so often that the other one completely loses it. At this time I was on the city next to Central and we were just chatting and then our… well, Al mentioned our father again… I hate it when he does that…
How in the world is that hard to understand? Its natural... my sister and I fight over the most stupid things sometimes.
Anyways, great job. Hope you'll write more. Oh wait this was published way back in 07... sorry :P.
| Z. U chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
I thiught it was great. Totally in character and everything.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
| Victorious-Mind chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
That was really cute, I loved it!
| EliTigre chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
Great work, really!
| Cartoon Cow chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
Honestly I don't think I would mind Ed throwing cookies at me teehee : ) what's ironic about me finding this was recently I got so mad I just ran and ran for what seemed like a long time but I'm not one for stamina so it probably wasn't. Anyway I got the same idea as this story just without the funny cookie thing : ) when I was running off my steam tho I couldn't help but think about Ed it just seemed to fit ya know? Glad I'm not the only one that agrees.
| Xtraitor chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
Darn it! I wanted cookies. *goes and sits in a dark corner*
| Reader chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Not bad, but you need a beta reader for some parts...
| whimsicallyIrritating chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
That was cute. Especially the mental image of Ed snacking on cookies. *FANGIRL SQUEE!1!one!*
| Darkness and Snow chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
Aww...I like it! 3
| goldacharmed chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Aww, what a sweet story. I really enjoyed it. Now look what you've done, I have a sad smile on my face now! Argg, Dam you brilliant writer! lol
| etoile-de-saphir chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Hey :D i really enjoyed your story! it's very cute :3 and i love parental between those two
Do you mind if i translate this story into french and post it in the site? :D