Reviews for It Hurts
Vanidot chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Interesting POV! I totally get that! Thank You so much for not writing it in the first person. First person storiers annoy for some reason. Nice idea!
bluedragon1836 chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
I liked it. that was good. I think that has to be one of my favorite episodes.
Eilidh17 chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
Brilliant! Best thing is I can just imagine Jack saying all those things in his mind...its just so...*thinks* Jack-ish...
Dreamer22 chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
I honestly have to say that the shroud is one of three episodes that I would not willingly watch a second time, the other two being the ones where Janet and Daniel die/ascend. but that is neither her nor there, I like the insight into Jack's mind, well done
madaboutdanny chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
In The Shroud I find Jack a little careless toward Daniel, I didn't find him hurt, unfortunately...In your story he seems a little selfish rather than hurt. This is my opinion about Jack in The Shroud! I'd like to see a Jack much more worried about Daniel, like Daniel he's been for him in Abyss...
starjems88 chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
nice...
AvengingAngel101 chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
Wow, I liked this... I've always liked the JackDaniel friendship, and this was very realistic and eactly how I imagined Jack would be thinking during that scene. Also, I like the way you haven't necessarily portrayed Daniel as the 'good guy' in this - I find that people tend to be a little biased in casting him in a good light, when in reality, let's face it, he's screwed in the head, as adorable as he is. But maybe that's just me.

Good job, anywho-which-way.

AvengingAngel x