Reviews for Broken Rules
movieholic chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
Seeing as your characters strongly (in appereance) resemble the real characters, why not just use them? Making up a cast of all your own OCs is a bad idea in fanfiction, it defeats the purpose.

On the other hand, it's an alright story so far. Too many "memories" in italics, but hey, it's fine. Keep up.
JJ Rust chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Not a bad start. You definitely captured the feel of the Transporter movies. Good cliffhanger, too. Some grammar mistakes. "Mission: Impossible" should be capitalized since it's a proper name. Few missing commas, too.

Will continue with this one. Keep on writing.
Untergrundschnecke chapter 3 . 3/22/2008
Huh, that was really cool. I hope you're going to write more :) You stopped at a very exciting scene! Excuse me for just that short comment but I'm from Germany and my English isn't the best...
Benedict Hardy chapter 2 . 10/1/2007
Wow, really cool, I loved the transporter 1. Hope Jason gets a hot chinese chick too :P

Anyway, try and get a car chase in somewhere, that'd be awesome, and keep up the good work!