|Reviews for Broken Rules|
| movieholic chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
Seeing as your characters strongly (in appereance) resemble the real characters, why not just use them? Making up a cast of all your own OCs is a bad idea in fanfiction, it defeats the purpose.
On the other hand, it's an alright story so far. Too many "memories" in italics, but hey, it's fine. Keep up.
| JJ Rust chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Not a bad start. You definitely captured the feel of the Transporter movies. Good cliffhanger, too. Some grammar mistakes. "Mission: Impossible" should be capitalized since it's a proper name. Few missing commas, too.
Will continue with this one. Keep on writing.
| Untergrundschnecke chapter 3 . 3/22/2008
Huh, that was really cool. I hope you're going to write more :) You stopped at a very exciting scene! Excuse me for just that short comment but I'm from Germany and my English isn't the best...
| Benenenene chapter 2 . 10/1/2007
Wow, really cool, I loved the transporter 1. Hope Jason gets a hot chinese chick too :P
Anyway, try and get a car chase in somewhere, that'd be awesome, and keep up the good work!