Reviews for The Theory of Reincarnation
prettypinkbookworm chapter 3 . 9/27/2007
can I sign on for the revolution? pretty, pretty please? Alice is a bit more central than Marcus, but nobody reads about her either! But I will continue, and you better contine too. I know exactly how you feel though. I was bored and wrote a couple of oneshots (which weren't even close to my best work) and they have half the words, half the effort, yet twice the hits and review of Alice.

OK, here's the part about your story: I like it! Good job, keep going, I want to know what the favor is... And what does Elizabeth look like...?
ReaderRabid chapter 3 . 9/27/2007
Wow, Aro could really ask any favor, couldn't he? I'm not sure I'd like him having something to hold over my head. Marcus might be getting in over his head.

I'm totally laughing over the escaped humans. heh.

What on earth is he thinking, keeping someone in a room without them getting out OR anyone finding her? He's either loony or deeply in love with his past. Or both.

I'm totally curious now. Can't wait for the next chapter - you can do such cool things with minor characters, things that you can't do with major ones.
BellyGnomes chapter 3 . 9/27/2007
Okay... this was much shorter then I thought... but I can actually get a review in before math! Yeah!

I loved that they were playing hide and go seek with their food... imagine doing that with cows... for some reason that sounds fun to me...




No... probably not...

I have no idea!

That's funny that you didn't realize that Edward's mother's name's Elizabeth... because Marcus' Elizabeth's name isn't Elizabeth...

Did that make any sense?

Probably not... :D
citixlitesxburnxtehxdead chapter 3 . 9/27/2007
Awesome story. I love Aro's exasperation, and how you made him more realistic than most people do. Keep it up )
Queen of Atlantis chapter 3 . 9/27/2007
Love the story!
tripswhenshewalks chapter 2 . 9/27/2007
This is really cool! I wish SM would tell us a little more about him though. As far as scary side characers go, Marcus has always been my favorite. Update soon!
BellyGnomes chapter 2 . 9/26/2007
Hey Hey Hey... I like the Nsync Celebrity song...

"If I didn't have cheese like every day would you still want to be with me?"

My answer is No Justin... if you didn't have cheese everyday... really, what's the point?...

Okay... back on track... I'm slightly less confused :D

But did you realize that Elizabeth is the name of Edward's mother? Maybe you did... probably?

Anywho... I did laugh at this...

"I would just have to keep her here for a while, that’s all… Humans, after all, have short lifespans. Maybe I can just ride it out…"


Only a few minutes to a vamp... I can picture Marcus just staring at her waiting for her to hurry up and die... because he couldn't possibly kill her...

And why does he want to talk to Aro? Maybe Aro will make a game out of it... He likes games... mayb consider her a new pet... people have dogs as pets and some people eat dogs... :P

okay... I'm back... me and my distractions!

I'm intrigued... you can continue... yes... you have my permission :D

You know what I just realized... if/when other people read this... I bet thaty have really funny opinions about me! Waterbear! :3
ReaderRabid chapter 2 . 9/25/2007
very interesting idea - I'm so glad I put you on author alert!

I'm so curious to see what happens next, and how you develop Marcus's character. Your character development skills rock, so I'm sure he'll be fascinating.

One question - I know she isn't dead, but wasn't she bitten? isn't she going to Change? Or did she just faint with all the commotion? I must have missed why she was on the ground.

Thanks for another interesting story to suck all my free time out of my life! ;)
ljv chapter 2 . 9/25/2007
Finally an original plot line. Other stories have been killing me witht he redundency of them. This is exciting. Keep it up. It is so nice for something new.

Amanda Pack chapter 2 . 9/25/2007
is he gonna keep her?

what will happen?

is she bella?

ya, i know its a minor character story.
CarterSouthie chapter 2 . 9/25/2007
RNC had how many reviews?
prettypinkbookworm chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
I LOVE side characters. And I know how you feel, I'm trying to reconstruct Alice's life in my story Alice, but I have a bit more to go off than you do. Still, I get sick of EdwardxBella stories and I really like this. I can't wait to read more!
Amanda Pack chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
who's elizabeth?


gemma smells like apple cake chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
interesting i like it

ciao xoxoxoxo
BellyGnomes chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
Review for:

Not Another “Not Another” Story Otherwise Known As “Yes”

F*ck yeah! I got it right!

“God…” Felix complained. “Are you sure she’s a vampire? She insanely slow!”

“Relax,” Aro soothed. “Heidi’s almost here…”

Already laughing and I have no idea what is going on... for some reason I can picture Felix tapping his toe in irritation... :D

Okay.. I finished... and I'm confused... Marcus is confusing... maybe?

I don't know... maybe he isn't confusing... Crap... I want more... I guess... :D

Damn it... just give me more... then maybe I won't be confused... maybe :3
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