|Reviews for Swans|
| Guest chapter 13 . 12/2/2016
I want to fucking fight you. It's such a shame that such a great story like this was never completed, but I understand that you have different priorities. Anyway 10/10 fic bro. I really enjoyed that this story took place in the "Whammy's house era" as I like to call it. And ugh,,, you portrayed the characters so well that I just have to hunt other fanfictions and see if they're as greatly portrayed as yours! If you ever read this, I just wanted to say that I hope you're doing well in life and that this work is still greatly appreciated (seriously ive been dreaming about it for months ;-;).
Thank you for such a marvelous story -
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/28/2016
Why did you abandon this!? It was perfect! ;-;
| Savannah chapter 13 . 3/17/2015
I KNOW ITS BEE YEARS BUT THIS FIC IS KILLING ME
| Savy chapter 1 . 3/16/2015
PLEASE FINISH THIS
| mxmsupporter chapter 13 . 9/23/2013
Such a shame you decided to discontinue this story. May I ask how would you finish it or did you not think of that yet? :)
Aah, I loved the kiss scene. I partially knew that Matt would react violetly but after seeing him brushing Mello's cheek like that... I think it was only the shock of realisation. Or maybe? ;)
The whole story was great, after the summary I thought it'd be sth high school like but when I got to Wammy's I was very happy. These stories have their adorable charm. And with Matt descripted as he was and Mello so sweet with his dilemmas... It was awesome :) I liked Mel's reaction on Matt's girlfriend very much (quite similar to mine, actually xD). And the whole Justin-L-crush thing was sweet. But not sweeter than when Mello told Matt about his parents... Aah, I could write a lot more but I don't know that many "sweet" and "amazing" synonyms ;)
To sum up: one would think that Wammy's House stories are all the same... Well, you've proved that it's not true :) I'd be head over heels if you decided to continue it but I respect your decision. It's always better to tell your readers bout it that have them wait with no hope. Talking about hope, I'll put an alert on this story but I don't expect much. Thanks for these 13 chapters :)
| Mattxmello fan chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
Awwwh mello finally kissed him but why Matt why run away your supposed to kiss back and be happy and cute and gha! Just be together please update soon love your writings
| Guest chapter 13 . 5/17/2013
Awwwwh poor mello I hope Matt comes around loved this chapter your totally awesome writer but except for your story all I ever find is mello x near fic is there any other Matt mello that's good?
| CitrusFlag chapter 13 . 4/19/2013
Where is this next chapter?! If you died without us knowing, I would be so effing sad! TT_TT Don't die, pwitty pweaze..
| hello chapter 13 . 2/8/2013
godammit! I nearly screamed at the end. You can't just leave it like this! D:
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/21/2012
FUCKING FINISH I RIGHT NOW, BITCH
| Naoko Tapioca chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
I read your little one-shot 'Love and Smallpox' a while back, and I fell in love with the way you write. This seems pretty interesting. I haven't read it yet, though. Which is bollocks. But, I'm defintely looking forward to it. Wow, I saw the last update date. Holy Crap. 4 years? The reviewers are going nuts, haha. Update woman. I hope you're okay though. O.O Good luck with this!
| FUUUUUUUUUUUU chapter 13 . 6/4/2012
It's been years... And a cliffie. Not just a cliffie, but a yaoi-cliffie. Those are the worst motha-effers.
So, WRITE, WRITER-MONKEY! WRIIIIIIIITE!
Unless you're dead. Then R.I.P. Writer-Monkey-Minion.
| MattxMello 3 chapter 13 . 5/8/2012
OMG! ITS BEEN FOUR YEARS! FOUR FRIKEN YEARS SINCE YOU UPDATED! YOU NEED TO UPDATE! !
| checkerboardom chapter 13 . 3/28/2012
Dang it Matt, stop being a dense prat and love Mello back already you clotpole! Poor MarshMEllo... And you, chickie, update please!
| random alias chapter 13 . 8/14/2011
Hey, just wanted to let you know that this was the very first fanfiction I ever read, yep this one right here. I got the link from YouTube and I have to say this is definitely one of the things that can consistently cheer me up no matter the situation, and I can't thank you enough for showing me such a wonderful first glimpse and inspiring my years long addiction