Reviews for Right after Italy
Savanna06 chapter 4 . 10/2/2007
this is really good. but why does bella always take him back so easily? having been left and then starting up that relationship again there is always resentment, which i never see in these stories. please update soon...thanks
LM2256 chapter 4 . 9/26/2007
aw this is so cute! well the beginning was sorta sad with Bella running away and all but you didn't over dramatize it and that's a good thing. you kept if for the most part down to earth haha vampires and all. can't wait to read more!

,LM
dianag99217 chapter 4 . 9/25/2007
Great chapter...great story.
Jessica Potter-Cullen chapter 3 . 9/24/2007
I love your story I hope u keep writing
reader101 chapter 3 . 9/24/2007
there's really nothing to say, except the fact that i can't wait to read more.
LikeAFairyTaleAgain chapter 3 . 9/24/2007
Great story, i'm very curious to see how it will turn out. Please update soon!
The Tate Twins chapter 2 . 9/24/2007
Oh. My. Gosh! I absolutely love it! However, may I critique it a little? Alright. You went into Philadelphia a little too fast, so I kind of had to read over it again to understand what happened. And, I don't really like the idea of Bella drinking, because she's not really the kind of person who would do that, you know? It's a bit out of character.

Remember, these are only suggestions! Keep writing, and update soon, please!

Luv, Liss
dianag99217 chapter 2 . 9/24/2007
I like it...not cheesy at all. I am anxious for the next chapter...good story
Vividus chapter 3 . 9/24/2007
Yay!

May the Force be with You! (MTFBWY)

Viv
Vividus chapter 2 . 9/24/2007
Nice. Can't wait for more.

This is unique.

MTFBWY!
vjd chapter 2 . 9/24/2007
interesting...I never thought Edward woudl let her go so easily...well maybe he won't after all...the phone call could be him..
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