|Reviews for Failed Avenger|
| Sa-Ga-Ne chapter 24 . 9/6
I don't even know what to think. You see, there is something you need to understand about people who are fans of cute Sasuke-seme Gaara-uke stories. We like the story to be filled with it. And really... That's the main issue. Throughout the whole story there reall wasn't much yaoi in it... At all... To be honest. I mean, there was some snip-its of their romantical relationship, but you didn't elaborate on that as much as I would have wanted. Like, one minute it seems like they hate each other, because of all the glaring, but then all of a sudden they are together? It seems pretty off and on up until the end. Also there wasn't much of a plot either... Nothing that rally impacted their relationship as lovers... So I don't see where the relationship development was coming from... The only conflict I saw was Gaara loosing chakra in the end and the sleeping issues. Those cute SasuGaa moments should be frequent. I shouldn't need to wait like 5 chapters for something to happen between them. There was more fighting shit than romance. Not to mention I couldn't understand what you were saying half the time. There is a way to make you're writing descriptive without over doing it. All I can say is that it was hard for me to enjoy this. I didn't get shivers up my spine from cuteness like I usually do from SasuGaa stories. It was... To put it bluntly... Boring as hell
| Samdorian chapter 24 . 6/3/2015
I must say I don't like this pairing. And after reading the first chapter, I though "Well, just keep going, man. Maybe it gets better, who knows.".
And it did.
This is one of the best fanfictions I saw on this website. It's funny, romantic, logical, and suprising. It's not like most of ff here. I could almost see it as a movie.
Congratulations, you have a talent :) You should cherish it.
| Ashinia chapter 24 . 4/1/2015
My favorite story indeed. Its just beautiful
| Xyra Kaze chapter 6 . 1/11/2014
Great chapter. The fight was interesting
| Xyra Kaze chapter 5 . 1/11/2014
Sasuke's dreams keep getting weirder and weirder
| Xyra Kaze chapter 4 . 1/11/2014
Those advisors are really annoying
| Xyra Kaze chapter 3 . 1/11/2014
It's actually quite sad that Gaara still can't sleep. I actually think it would happen ib the real anime. Good chapter
| Xyra Kaze chapter 2 . 1/11/2014
Wow this was a short chapter but I found it entertaining
| Xyra Kaze chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
This is very interesting so far. That part about itachi in a tutu was funny oh and the raccoon part
| Yaoi Is Life GYS chapter 24 . 5/8/2013
Another chapter would be nice :). Great story
| karupin sama chapter 24 . 3/29/2013
It's hard to find great SasuGaa fic like this and look, it's complete too..sooo happy!
| Dead account no longer here chapter 24 . 1/4/2013
| yaoilover17 chapter 8 . 4/27/2011
This is quite a good story. May I ask what the song is, in this chapter? It sounds very nice and relaxing. I didn't know that Sasuke could sing :)
| GaaraLover1298 chapter 24 . 3/11/2011
omg u genious this is perfect xD i am so glad gaara survived! this was gr8!
| sade chapter 24 . 2/17/2011
...this was a hilarius story, I like it. though, like sasuke, I would like to ask; was that nessesary?... or at leaste a few parts... OH! and FYI I dont think sasuke is a brunette...His hair is more of a raven color... but it is you'r oppinion. Thanks for putting this story up And it was really great! v