Reviews for My Love
xL-iz-After-BeyondBirthdayx chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Awwwww. :3
AshleyTangerine chapter 2 . 6/14/2010
CUTE! Even with the terrible grammar. But you can always imagine Ryu-chan and Shu-chan have done the translating!
Chikogie chapter 2 . 8/11/2008
The plot has something to it, I'll give you that. However, the grammar errors and spelling errors bring it down. I'd look into detail, not that it's shy of detail, but put a little more effort into it. First or not. Imagine it in your head, every detail, ever movement. Good plot, poorly written
SesshomarusMate2468 chapter 2 . 6/6/2008
It was awesome! The greatest AND YOU HAVE TO ADD MORE!
YaoiHellian chapter 2 . 6/5/2008
SWEETNESS I SERIOUSLY DONT LIKE YUKI HE'S A PRICK YA HE HAD CRAP HAPPEN TO HIM BUT COME ON ANYWAYS LOVED THE STORY LOVE - RONNIE-CHAN
chrono-contract chapter 2 . 2/4/2008
not bad!:)
Chikogie chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
I'd like to see a second chapter to this. I'd recommend proof reading, not that I don't have mistakes. HAHA I have tons. Sometimes I overlook. But if you read it over before posting you'll notice mistakes...such as the word sympathy...you made it look like symphony... o_O
kitoriwitch613 chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
Bring on the lemon!
princesspyro296 chapter 1 . 9/26/2007
OMG X3 I love it hehe just a few mistakes but other than that its pretty good!X3
TheFemalePharaoh chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
I like this one! A agret starter one, this is!

Is this just a one-shot od will there be more?

GREAT JOB!
journey maker chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
All I can say is WOW! That song is something isn't it? I really liked this story, it's your call if you put in a lemon scene or not, Please update when you can...