Reviews for Feather Reign
eliteforce chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
This looks really good, but...

we need updates!

you might want to work on the headings as well, as they look really weird sticking out.

Anyway, this looks good, it's just that we need updates!

The characters are fine, the introduction is intresting, it just needs to be continued.

Hope you continue it.

eliteforce