|Reviews for Shout!|
| TheOptimisticPessimist chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
This is the most obcene, vulgar and quite frankly funniest thing Ive read in well over too long...And my insomnia brought me to read it. Thank you this is going on the favorite list sweeite...Nyaahahahahahahaa...
| Memory-of-Melody chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
Just...WOW! This is awesome, and I seriously enjoyed the whole thing. You should be proud of this, dearie! I...wow, seriously, words cannot describe how much I loved this! I'm adding thsi to my favorites instantly! :D
| Kaye chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
OH. My. God...
Dual... I love you. Like forever and a day.
That was fantastically, wonderfully, wonderful with like sprinkles of awesome and win. Everyone just having the sex (except Zexy) and Sora being on top and just everything was purrfect. I really love your Zexion, so much. He's so meticulous and anal about everything... especially Demyx. I loved the writing style and just oh.. everything was perfect!
*gives you energy drink* Because you probably need it more than any cookie.
| morbidvoid13 chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
I liked it...though the whole marluxia/demyx thing creeped me out insanely.
| The Lydian Lady chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
Heh. This is awesome. So very awesome.
...and now! Bed!
| UnknownNumber chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
I must say that the timing of this piece was wonderful; I had just logged onto to check and see if you had updated, and had closed the window when I was alerted to the fact that I had new mail and that it was, in fact, an alert that you had posted this.
Again, lovely piece; you are truly an inspirational person with the way you keep everyone so well in character. Your tone and word choice in this was all just breathtakingly wonderful. I think Day Nineteen was my favorite conversation point, just for the simple fact of how Demyx answered; "How about no?". And the way you managed to repeat the words "There comes a time in every man’s life where he must make a decision: to breathe or not to breathe." was also well placed. The second time, the way it was used made me crack up. I could perfectly see Zexion's expression.
I also have to say that, out of the entire story, the lines "You know, Demyx, you’re making this very difficult.” “You know, Zexion, I wish you came with a translator. ‘Cause all I’ve been hearing this past month is blah blah blah.” just made my day. The way they spoke to each other and poked at each others nerves was flawless.
After a day of rough college exams, it's wonderful to sit down and read something as well written and just fully entertaining as this. Can't wait to see what you come up with next.
| firelunamelody chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
OMFG! I died laughing...
This was really good, especially the development between Demyx and Zexion. I was like... woah, this is good. So yeah. Keep up the good work!
| k123 chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
Oh, this was so cute! I laughed, I cried...but mostly I laughed. A lot. This was awesome :)
| krl25 chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
| ShadowAili chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
You know I love this, my darling. You know you know you /know/. And I still do. So very much. Adore you forever and ever and ever and IT IS BEAUTIFUL.
| Jaded Devil chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
Wow, this was certainly an interesting read. _
I had a feeling that Demyx would find out Zexion was living next door!
I haven't had this fun reading a fanfic in a while.. so thank you very much for writing something so good! :D