Reviews for Irrevocable Addiction
Bre Henson chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
This is a really awesome, and moving story!

You have a wonderful writing style. :)
psh chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
Good story overall, but there were some grammar errors that your beta-reader failed to address; in addition, there should be line breaks in between dialogue.

Wonderful storyline/characterization, though. I didn't know Death Note until recently, so I don't know if these character mindsets were overused in September of last year. I know they're pretty hackneyed now...it gets annoying...but this was good.
DXM Junkie chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
Poor Mello and Matt. Such beautiful side characters, which such a wonderful story. If I had owned deathnote:

L wouldnt have died

Nia would have died.

Light would have been naked from episode 3 onward.

Mello and Matt would have had some pretty smexy moments.

Great story!
Ryoshu Kin chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
I love it. It was a perfect summary of Matt and Mello.
momijikk chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
aw! how sweet! XD that's so good and cool and I love MattxMello, so there! ...heh, sorry...

so, riyou-chan aka r-chan directed me to you, and I agree with her. This was a good oneshot.

-momiji
Current PenName New PenName chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
Oh my god, that is so sad...

Definately a favorite.