Reviews for Back from Beyond
siriuslegolasmad chapter 10 . 2/2/2008
Like the plot...but for myself I don't particularly like Hermione, but I'm dealing with it. Lol. Could you possibly give the characters a bit more depth to make them seem more realistic and a lot more 3D rather than 2D...do that and it will be good. Plus as well...how can you not like the twins! lol! they rock. Keep writing, and in some cases, don't try making your sex scenes sound like they take part in a porn movie. Sometimes, less is more. : )

Altogether, keep writing it!

Lauren
Camryn chapter 10 . 1/28/2008
i really love your story! it's amazing, i hope you're not abandoning this... how's your bunny doing? ;)

i'm not a great fan of threesomes but the sirius/hermione part is definitely too good to leave a story because of something like that

so anyway: great work!

update soon

Cam
cancelmyaccountplz chapter 10 . 1/26/2008
Good chapter, but how much longer do I have to wait until Ginny gets what's coming to her? Just kidding, well kind of. :-) Anyways, I loved this chapter and can't wait for more.
Ryutana chapter 10 . 1/25/2008
Loving this so far! Please update as soon as you can!

I have noticed some, but very few, spelling and grammatical errors. Though I can not say this is THE best in this way that I've read (I've found spelling mistakes EVERYWHERE), it is certainly ONE of the best. No one is perfect, so I don't expect the different writers here to be, though I do appreciate the effort of trying to keep it easy to read.

I've found spelling errors in many mass-produced books. Maybe I'm mistaken, but I THINK I've found some in the HP books. XD
RagamuffinSundrop chapter 10 . 1/24/2008
Ignore the flamers, this is a great story.
Aswen chapter 10 . 1/24/2008
Nice chapter, I don't understand why everyone gets so hung up on grammer, yes it's important, but the txt language used now etc means that the odd gramatical error should be easy to read through... Update soon please!
Loony Tuney chapter 10 . 1/24/2008
That was good. Please update!
AliasCSINYFriendsER chapter 10 . 1/23/2008
*comforts Draco* Okay, who's insulting/flaming you and Draco? *stern look* Shame, shame.

I still think that Harry, Hermione, and Sirius should be the hot three-some. :-p *looks down at Draco* What do you think furry one?

LOVE IT! More soon!

~mandi *_*
SiriuslyLoveBound chapter 10 . 1/23/2008
Finally! A relationship Ron doesn't blow his top over! I think thats a first! Awesome chapter! So is inny the 'betrayal' part? Bad, bad girl. Does Harry find out? Please update soon!

~SiriuslyLoveBound
librarywitch chapter 10 . 1/23/2008
Great job. Thanks for a new chapter!
Midnight Little One chapter 10 . 1/23/2008
Damn it I want it to be Harry! Lol. Great story, I definitely cannot wait to read what happens next. Update soon!

~MLO
InnocentlyDark chapter 9 . 1/19/2008
*pets draco potter* WRITE MORE! lol i loved it just a question r we gonn sum? lol ;P
Midnight Little One chapter 9 . 1/17/2008
If this becomes a Sirius/Hermione/Harry threesome I'm going to love you for all eternity! Lol. So hot.
Jessie chapter 8 . 1/17/2008
Can you learn how to spell? That would be great!

steel - that is for the metal you want steal

stake - means like a wooden stake, you want steak

your story has a good premise hence the reason i tried to give it a chance till chapter 8, see if it developed further. But the writing is poor, you constantly take the reader out of the world they are in eg "Padfoot (dog form… just in case you don’t get it)" and the characters are poorly developed.
amrawo chapter 9 . 1/16/2008
great chapter! loved it! the last line was great :)! update soon!
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