Reviews for Young Turks
NCISWarriorCats chapter 14 . 2/2/2016

starlight.moonlight.sunshine chapter 14 . 1/1/2016
Omg you do not understand how much I love this fic and how much I need more or this - so much I've gon through the headache of typing in my long email nd password nf tiring dis message on ma phone n now I'm tired
Mirage74 chapter 14 . 10/3/2012
Please, please, please update! This story is awesome, you're writing style is exciting and engaging, and I know for one thing, I would be happy to see an update for this story! (And I am sure that others who have read this story would be happy to see a new chapter added, too.) Please update this story, and your other stories as well!
autumnfloweres chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
This is awesome! Keep going, this is amazing!
Blood Shifter2 chapter 14 . 10/14/2011
this story is so good. but why did you stop? i hope to see it continued. keep up the good work.
BucketBasket chapter 14 . 3/5/2011
Oh there are too many things to say about this fic. I have no idea where to start. The wonderful writeing,the just perfect mix of humor,how you pretty much nailed their personalities as sparklings. There's so many good things I have to say. In a word, it's beautiful. I almost cried when screamer's mother-creater died(and just pretty much anything to do with Screamer's homelife) I also LOVED Skywarp's and Thundercracker's "Operation: Sparkling Rescue" It was hilarious and it showed SO much friendship between them.
Yueri-chan chapter 14 . 6/26/2010
Oh please, you have to update this! I love it!
Astrianna chapter 14 . 4/6/2010
OMG, the last few chapters had me almost crying! And laughing during the hospital escape. I just want to grab Starscream and hug him. The PTSD situation and reactions of the three were excellent. The only thing that seemed strange was 'Warp's overall behaviour. He seemed far more disobedient and pouty than before. Well, I really hope you continue this, it's an awesome story!
Sandmiller chapter 14 . 3/15/2010
PLEASE say you're going to continue this. I was taking a break from studying for finals and came across this. And. I. Was. HOOKED. No, really. Your fic had me smiling and laughing at parts, and my fingers were crossed at other parts (used as in "please" and not as in "I'm lying right now"). I want to read more! There were parts that were just too adorable! UGH!

I've getting cavities because this fic is just too sweet!

I really want to know what happens next!
crimsonseastorm chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy...*bounces happily*


At any rate,it's pity I'm just finding this now...good thing I have awesome friends who recommend awesome fics to me XDD...forewarning I'm probably going to drive you bonkers...I have this habit of reviewing most chapters _

I love the start to this! It's definitely see little hints of their'll be lots of fun to see where it goes XDD
The Perfect Spell chapter 14 . 8/21/2009
Hurry up and update please!

I like this story - although I think that you're being too mean to 'Warp. He isn't just a spoiled sparkling, you know. Not all the things that go wrong has to be his fault. And Starscream's almost too mary-sueish.

Shouldn't Stealth and Nebula be concerned about 'Warp after he was injured too? Instead, most of their concern is centered on Screamer.

Haha anyway its a good story and I look forward to reading more. :)
KisaShika chapter 14 . 8/14/2009


damit, zat! *shakefist*

I'll come up with a worthy comment. Maybe. Possibly. I don't know. I think my logic circuts got fried by awesome-sauce. SPICY! I want moar.
John Smith chapter 14 . 8/11/2009
FINISHED FINALLY. Okay once again great chapter. I like how you've REALLY established Starscream's little breakdowns right now. He seems to always have been susceptible to emotional moments, but this is really his first berserker moment. You mentioned at the bottom in a little A/N that you were worried about pinning their reactions correctly or it being corny. I think it's perfect, and you may have edited it since feeling that way, but it flows beautifully just like the rest of the story. At this point, you've built up the characters so well that they have probably developed lives of their own, and rather than you guiding them through situations, they are guiding you! Hah!

Okay here are my final comments. I mentioned that chapter thirteen is my absolute favorite, and that's because (as I touched upon already), it really did a great job of relieving the angst from the story. It acted as a great distraction for Starscream, but just as myself and most readers probably feared, a distraction isn't enough to foster true healing. You've done a great job showing in general the way these characters work so far. It's becoming so much more easy to see them as they are in the present. I can only imagine that after this, the seed of fear and distrust has been planted in Skywarp and Thundercracker. Now they may begin to see one another as the 'best friends' and Starscream as the 'other friend,' even if it's completely subconscious. As though to push that point, they now share the ties of true family with one another, both having a living parent, and, you know, those parents are gettin' pretty cozy with one another to boot. This, even more so, separates Starscream from them, although probably more so in his own eyes. They are the sparklings, and he is the 'adopted one'. Anyway, I'm not even sure if that would really be the case, but I always had an easier time seeing Thundercracker and Skywarp as having the closest bond of the three. BUT MOVING ON. I think you are rather insidious for writing such a heartfelt and beautiful background for these three characters, knowing that they are going to turn out the way they do. It's sort of depressing. But I still love it and feel like I can appreciate it all the more, because it gives them exactly what EVERYONE has: an innocent childhood. All children are born innocent, it's not like they are just 'evil' or something. It's incredibly hard to write them in the present and keep them in character, but to write a story that actually shows them developing from innocent little kids into the cruel Decepticon Seekers we all know and love (to hate)... man I can't express the respect I have for you right now. It is nuts. N-V-T-S nuts! Serious! Okay well I think I'm done with my review for now. Note the "For now," cuz I seriously might come back and add another when I think of more to say. Frickin'.. love this story.
John Smith chapter 13 . 8/11/2009
I think this is my favorite chapter so far. It has taken this story from a light-hearted coming-of-age story turned serious to an adventure jailbreak! The parallelism between the adults taking a slightly more mature but still devious route to achieve the same as the two younglings is awesome. This is my favorite chapter so far! Favorite times a million! I love it 100%!
John Smith chapter 12 . 8/11/2009
I don't think I've ever routed for someone committing a slow and painful murder. It's sort of disturbing to feel that way, but at the same time, I feel as though this is a fitting end for him, more so than a trial and jail time. He brought this upon himself. I can't help but find myself a little disgusted with Starscream's mother as well. I hate to say that, especially since she's just met her end, but seriously... :( Those last words are so, so hurtful, even if she never intended them to be that way. She basically told him to leave, to run away. It's insulting and depressing and.. ugh. Nevermind the fact that she facilitated the whole situation by letting it go on the way she did. Man, this story is so true to life, I can't even express just how much it truly is, but that makes it so much more touching to read. It's a lesson, really, without having to live through the painful consequences to boot.
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