I love Thundercracker and Skywarp's protectiveness of Starscream. It was so sweet. And yay for him for inventing a new comm. Did he get permission from his creator to learn to fight?

Yay! I was so hoping you'd update this soon! What a good chapter. I love Skywarp's dad. He's so cool. XD

Maybe now that he's teaching them to fight, Starscream might be able to stand up to his own dad.

Yay! I'm glad to see an update, I'm really enjoying this story. How far are you going to go with this? All the way to the Academy? What's going to turn Starscream into the arrogant jerk we all know and love?

Great to see you updated! Awesome chapter, too! XD Starscream's pretty smart...

*cheers for Starscream* Wonderful chapter! I love the dynamic between the three and Skywarp's father is fantastic.

Good to see Starscream getting some /positive/ attention. Lord knows he needs it.

Brilliant! Again a great chapter. Was thrilled to see the new chapter come in. I am enjoying your story very much. I like your writing as well. No rushing to complete a scene or get through your story. Thank you for posting.

Yay! You updated. Poor Starscream It's a good thing he's so brilliant. Hopefully Skywarp's and Thundercracker's creators will look after him. Please update soon.

Another great chapter. I have to tell you, just reading this story makes me so happy. It's really great and you're an amazing writer :D

yay! new chapter. this was really good. starscream needs some praise. awesome chapter. please please please update soon. did starscream's creators say he could do this?

I remembered reading this story a while back and so I HAD to search for it again.

I still love it, it's still amazing, and I feel so sorry for Starscream. Update soon!

This is cute! I wanna hear the rest of this.

This story is so beautiful. You did a remarkable job here portraying the three Seekers personalities ever since they were sparklings. And you made every word enjoyable. You focused and stopped in all those little details that define their characters. Thundercracker’s shyness and reflexive mood, Starscream’s hunger for knowledge and freedom, Skywarp’s love for pranks and adventure…

It’s so easy to see these three like true friends thanks to your writing full of imagination and images. Common places of childhood like war games, the first drunkenness, the insults… everything seems so magical in this story!

I found so touching the way Starscream flinched when TC’s mother-creator attempted to touch him. Yes, Starscream has been portrayed like a cruel and treacherous villain, but all behavior has origins. It is natural to fear to become evilness.

Oh my… if I loved Screamer before, after reading your story he has a new place of tenderness in my heart. Please keep writing this. It had been a delight to read!

I had planned to review each chapter after reading them, but I couldn't stop reading.

Okay, I'm not a fan of the Seekers, but I really think this story is absolutely fabulous.

I really can imagine the street where they live. The friendship between them. Everything in this story is being painted in my mind through your words.

Even the domestic abuse Screamer suffers. You've actually done a fantastic job of painting the sorrow in his life, and it's not overdone in those stupid ways you read about in other stories. Yes its not pretty, it is angsty, but there is a truthfulness in it that makes you want to grab Screamer and give him a huge hug, just so he knows he's not alone and someone does care. Made me quite emotional.

You really are an effective story-teller regardless of what you are writing.

I can't wait for you to post more chapters to this story.

Take care,

T.

Aww. Poor widdle Starscream.

The three of them are just little balls of mayhem, aren't they?

Keep on with the story!