Oh no! Poor Starscream. TC and Warp's naivete is very endearing. TC's mom is a total badass.

aw poor starscream :'( and poor skywarp for getting hit on the back of his head and i just love the way skywarp's creator woke up a nice decepitcon wake up call

Very interesting tale for these three...very sad for Screamer, but it's also neat to see TC and Warp growing up as well )

I've just started reading this new story of yours and I love it. The development of the friendship between the sparklings is endearing, entertaining, and quite hilarious at times, but interspersed is the darkness of Starscream's home life. It was difficult to read for the emotion elicited was very real. However, I can see how this would impact him later as an adult Cybertronian and now I understand why he is studying so hard; it seems it might be the only way to freedom for Starscream and his battered mother-creator.

One final note, I'm very interested in the Ancients storyline now. It's been introduced here, mentioned in TFL, and is currently being elaborated further in 101 Things. It's an original storyline and one that I believe holds great promise for future thrills!

Thanks for sharing.

Good chapter!

And poor Screamer! i hope that everything will turn out ok for him and his mother-creator?

UPDATE soon

aw. poor screamer. that story was very neat. liked all the details. awesome chapter. keep up the good work and please update again soon. gotta know what happens with starscream.

You're making Starscream amazingly easy to feel sorry for. *shakes a fist* I wasn't supposed to start liking him! *was originally only here for Thundercracker*

Darn your writing skill! XO!

Still, I really like Thundercrackers mother-creator. She's awesome.

Wow this story just gets better and better. I really feel sorry for startscream and I hope that it soon turns out better for him.

Oh Starscream! *melts into a puddle of goo*

I like this fic so very much. Grease gun wars FTW! D!

Darn. I was waiting for TC's mummy to lay some serious punches on that nasty mech.

Yay for sleepovers! And poor Starscream. I hope to read more soon.

uh-oh. poor screamer. hope he gets help. awesome chapter. keep it up. update again soon.

That stupid father-creator if I get my hands on him I will...GAH!

(Takes a deep breath)

Alright!

You did a great job with this one :)

Poor Starscream :(

I really hope that you make that IDIOT, to father-creator, into a tin-can...and then squash it! And then...Uhh... you know what I mean...

Just kill the bastard!

Keep up the good work :)

Thundercracker's mom is officially awesome. *sagenod*

And Starscream's dad is not. Please to be killing him or having him imprisoned at the end of it all!

poor lil sceamer...more soon pleaz