| Reviews for Young Turks |
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   Gadget Monster chapter 4 . 12/3/2007 Holy crap. This is great work, my friend. I loved every minute of it. Its just far too cute for words. |
| Tenneric258 chapter 2 . 11/24/2007 Haha! I love how they became like best friends in so little time. _ Hooray for the cutest lil 'Cons ever! |
| Tenneric258 chapter 1 . 11/24/2007 This is such a cute story! I love how you made them all have seperate personalities. Screamer's a nerdy lil glitch, poor thunder's just plain shy, and mean old 'Warp is his uaual mischevious self! You've gotta be the first to do a fic about their childhood though. _ |
| Tenneric258 chapter 3 . 11/20/2007 oh no! Screamer's been abused by his... dad? 0_o So why is he afraid of femmes? Or is it just every grown bot in general? Either way it sucks for him. I swear in every fic I read he alwayd has a horrible past... poor star. -_- |
| Fire From Above chapter 3 . 10/19/2007 Heh, Skywarp sounded like Cartman. That was a sweet chapter, I can really see Starscream's developing neuroses here. |
| Fire From Above chapter 2 . 10/19/2007 That was so cute! Nice to see them in their innocence. |
| Fire From Above chapter 1 . 10/19/2007 That was fun and sweet. |
| Kenjirose chapter 3 . 10/18/2007 :) This is such a cute story, I'm enjoying it :) I give it a 6/10 |
| Twilightgirl chapter 3 . 10/18/2007 SO CUTE! I love it! |
| blood shifter chapter 3 . 10/18/2007 yay! you updated. good chapter. doesn't tc have a dad too? can't wait for the next chapter. hope its up soon. |
| Heartless-Jazz chapter 3 . 10/18/2007 can't wait till the next ch. write it soon...they are so cute |
| KayDeeBlu chapter 3 . 10/18/2007 Hi Dreamchylde! I really, really like the interactions between the three. I reread through your first two chapters because it's been a little bit and the thing I noticed right away is the how thier dialogue just seems to bounce off one another, just like how real little kids are. I'm really interested in how you're portraying Thundercracker and Starscream though. It's such a nice change from how I've been writing him. I think that whole "quiet, shy" persona fits him, which would help explain somewhat his natural tendency to be so apprehensive. Starscream on the other hand has always been high strung and I'm curious to read what has contributed to him being that way. The scene where he flinches when touched kind of made me feel bad for him so it should be interesting to find out where that stems from! :-) |
| kasrkintrooper chapter 2 . 10/2/2007 Where's the evil in all this? When do their fetish processors get rewritten? |
| Decepitcon project XD chapter 2 . 9/28/2007 oh i like |