This is a really REALLY good story! :D

it's Funny, heart warming, suspensive and a Real tear-jerker!

( T,T I think a really cried at chapt. 10 and 11 somewhere)

and I could really feel like I'm in the scene

or like watching a movie/TV

(that's what I feel while reading the story!)

this is really a story worth rereading all over again

(p.s. I got busted by my mom for staying up way too late

just to read this! and it was worth it!)

(p.p.s. could I draw a picture on this story, PLS :'3)

over and out

This chapter wasn't corny. I think Nightbeat is Jazz's creator. Just guessing. I hope to read more soon.

These younglings really outdid themselves this time! First pushing the limit on the flying thing...Stealth and Nebula both caught them on that...and it's a bonus when you can just take parts off your kids to keep them grounded ) But then Warp is starting to act out (perhaps due to Stealth and Nebula's relationship?) and they really go too far with the fist fight. Ya, boys will be boys, but they didn't even stop to think what might happen with Screamer. And that was a major miscalculation! Poor Star ( I thought Stealth did a wonderful job of calming Star down, but by then the damage is done...and it looked like Stealth was getting so close to finally asking Nebula to bond with him (at least that's what I got from the Nightbeat situation - he's so the creator of Jazz, right?) But Nebula is probably right...Warp needs support, TC is caught in the middle, and Star needs some TLC and time to heal...wonderful update!

Whoa.

I have no idea why I've never looked at this before, but it's good. And not corny at all.

Except from a smallish style-mishap (namely: worldly green optics) this has been one of the best reads on the site, and still promises to get better.

Now I'm off to brave a Jazz/OC pairing for longer than a paragraph - to find out where this ends up.

Wow, almost a year you haven't updated. I was wondering where this story has gone to. Worser than me, lol no offense ;p. Anyway, glad that you haven't given up on it; I hate it when a good story ends without being completed.

It turned from innocent to deadly serious when it came to the part where the Seeker trio started fighting, and not in a friendly way. I was surprised that Starscream reacted that way to TC and Skywarp fighting. I don't know much about PTSD but I'm guessing that it means when someone is trying to recover from a previous abuse of some kind and that external factors trigger up a negative reaction or memory of what had happened, which makes them do things they wouldn't? I need to look it up. Poor Starscream. And Skywarp for being at the end of his fists, poor thing.

It's good that Stealth and Nebula are their caretakers; they're very loving and comforting. Anyone else who didn't understand Starscream or the other two wouldn't do a better job.

I don't think it sounded *too* corny, but there was some corniness in it, honestly speaking. You've got the right emotion, it's just how you present it that's the issue. My advice is to describe the characters' actions more subtly and not say exactly how they are feeling so obviously. Otherwise it sounds overdramatic or overdone. That's what I learnt from creative writing books and my english teachers. Hope that helps.

Hmm, I don't know who Nightbeat's the creator of but is it someone we know from G1?

Quite a lengthy chapter but it's a treat after waiting for it hehe. It's interesting to learn more about the psychological disorders being experienced in it and its effects. The psychological aspects of the Seekers are what we don't see in the cartoon and we all have a theory as to why they behave like they do. I like your take on it :).

I look forward to reading more.

I'm extremely happy that you updated. I think the reactions from everyone were well-done. Don't worry, it does not sound corny. So is it the idea of the loss of freedom that set Starscream off? I'll have to check my DSM to look at the diagnosis for PTSD. But either way, you did great in portraying Starscream's intense rage and subsequent catatonia. I also noticed how easily tempted he is, which lays down the groundwork for his future behaviors. I'm definitely interested to see how things turn out with Nebula and Stealthshadow. Nightbeat really startled me, but that just might be because of my perception of him, which itself was heavily influenced by Metal Gear Prime. I have no idea who his sparkling is, but since he is a detective and relies on logic and deduction, I am going to guess Prowl.

Wow! Woderfull, I am happy that you followed the fic

Well, I always knew that if it was worth waiting for, and I waited long enough, it would be worth my time. And it certainly was!

The change between where things were the last chapter and where you picked things up for this way was a little confusing at first, but on the whole it fit nicely. I can understand it having to be as dark as it was, character development, plus PTS for poor lil Star, and I applaude your expert use of it.

Corny? Psh, I think not! Very plausible, and I can't wait to see where you take things the next chapter; my only hope is we won't have as long a wait this time, but I will wait for as long as it takes.

Thanks for the update!

I don't think it came off as corny at all, it seamed really believable to me. It was a good chapter and I really hope you update again soon. There's obviously going to be some issues, with what Starscream went through and all... *huggles all three seekers* I enjoyed reading.

It was a rather lengthy wait, but well worth it. For your work, I could wait a lifetime if it was feasible!

I found the chapter very believable and not corny at all-in fact, far from it. Starscream's reactions seemed truly believable. The whole fight will prove to a painful, growing experience for all of them. Stealth is right, sparklings will fight, but I don't agree with Nebula's decision to stop their training or history lessons. That may backfire and only serve to repress them; there will be no outlet for frustrations.

Great Chapter Overall. A!

Oh, may I hazard a guess and say Nightbeat is the father-creator of say, Jazz?

YAY! you're back. was gonna wonder when they'd have their first REAL fight. it was very good. and can't figure out who nightbeats creation is. its gonna drive me nuts thinking about it. awesome chapter. keep up the good work. update soon please.

I'm really glad you updated this. I thought the story was discontinued it'd been so long D; Please keep writing!

Your ALIVE!

Hes Jazz's creater right?

And OMG. Screamer just went off. TC must have been terrified to see that. ANd what did Stealth take out of their backs? Was it to stop them from flying? Or using their wings?

And i cannot believe you made that happen at the end. Ive been waiting so long and then poof. Nothing! Well something happened but it was worse than nothing so im sticking with nothing.

ANyway ... now that this happened you mustn't make us wait for the next chapter. Please!

And it didnt sound corney at all.

Oh, I'm so happy you're back! I've missed this story, it's one of the best I've ever read about Starscream, Skywarp and Thundercracker's childhood. I think you did a really great job with this chapter, and I can't wait to read the next one!

And here i thought you were done with this story XD but I am your continuing it so we can see more of the life of how they lived together. And yes was a sad chapter but well worth reading I can't wait for more