Say yes, Nebula! You know you want to! Then our young seeker friends can really be brothers. I love how the story is going and keep up the good work! Signing off!

Love it, it was just so much fun. 'Warp and TC are really starting to come into their own in this chapter, as you said. Their preparations and actions were awesome. Poor Starscream, all he can do is wait like a damsel in distress and comment on his friends' idiocy. I like the name of the other moon, as well as 'Screamer's mom. Moonsong is definitely fitting. Poor Ultra Magnus indeed, and that was just his first day on the job. Also easy to see where Red Alert gets it from. As for the question, I think yes would make things quite interesting, but it's ultimately up to you. Thank you so much for the chapter.

*Sigh* It seems that abuse really is universal. Feel sorry for Screamer and his mother.

Never would thought that Transformers would have homework. Great story idea.

Glad to see Starscream have some positive influence in his life and that TC and Warp stick with him.

I enjoyed Stealthshadow's tale of the first Seekers and how the name came to be.

I think if she really wanted to say 'No', she already would have! XD Another great chapter. :)

ROFLMAO! oh I loved how you portrayed skywarp and tc in this chapter. It was so great and their escape at the end,priceless. You'll have to do more stories following them through the academy as well.

Yes she should accept! I think it would be a great match!

Ok, for some reason...it's not lettin' me read chapter 13?

chapter 12? when were these last 3 chapters done and I didn't know about them? Oh well that was a great catch up and I loved how he got his revenge but poor screamer..

wo ho!

Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!

*smiles, grins, chuckles, laughs.

I was so excited to see an update this evening and then to open to the page and see it was going to be long was even better. This was a great way to end the day and week.

I think this is the best chapter to date. You truly outdid yourself on this one. Loads of fun after the sad ending in the previous. And a good long chapter. Well paced. Nothing felt rushed. The action sequences with the younglings. Very well done. Could totally picture it all happening.

Good job. Thank you so much for writing and sharing.

Full scale riot! After the last chappy being so sad this one had me in giggles as Warp ran down the halls and TC tried to rescue Screamer. And I was hoping those two might get together to raise those crazy younglings LOL! TC really made his femme creator proud, saving his friends from danger. And Moonsong is a perfect name for Starscream's femme creator too. I'm just glad Screamer is going to be ok - I was really worried he was gonna be slagged and so PTSD that he might be really off. But when you have freinds like Warp and TC, the world better watch out. Nebula and Stealth are gonna have their hands full...and Ultra will be looking for a new city to manage )