should've given naruto a mask like kakashi to hide the whiskers

you shouldn't have told us you took out the anonymous review sp you could cech the people if it was not nice then you could have reported them or something

did you ever continue this

This seems to be a good fic but I can't say that it aged that well, as it was first published in 2007, there is a lot of common knowledge that is missing, like Kushina being the previous jinchuuriki and the like. If you can understand and accept this, I think this would be a good read, if you are like me and have a problem with this type of thing then you should move on.

I really hope this isn't a harem.

gyd

I love the Bleach reference

Me encanta tu historia, y me da ánimos para aprender inglés.

I’m not gonna lie this feels weird I feel like you should have done those hinata and Naruto scenes when they were like in part 2 them making out at 12 years old is so weird

There’s really one huge problem I got this series is way to drawn out literally it took about 43 chapters to be in the chunnin exams this is an amazing story but the drawn out scenes were getting annoying

Ok so your story is really good and I already know it’s complete but you have an issue with run on sentences exhe must be really strong then… I’ve gotta catch up then!” As apprised to just I’ve gotta catch up it’d sound much more natural that way and overall more smooth but other than that the only issue I’ve had is how long you spent on naruto’s academy days and the days before he was even in the academy as it doesn’t provide TOO much to the plot, I feel like all of that could have been resolved in ten chapters overall but that’s just my opinion

yea that had been my first thought that kakashi would use the rasengan as a chakra training not for the jutsu, smart actually.

Muy bueno

hate that you have sasuke learning rasengan. he is still a dick like in canon. same with sakura. even though she is better in this than canon I doubt se has the chakra for it.

the ending of this chapter is quite bad