Best fanfic I've ever read, finished all 63 chapters in one week. Great job!

Great fanfic just started reading but Fugaku was said to respeft Obito's dying gift to Kakashi? Seems OOC to me.

I'm trying hard not to cry

Bleach confirmed

Good on you for sticking to your guns regarding the romance. You are aware of the grammar issues so i wont bother pointing any out, however none were bad enough to make the text confusing, so i can see how someone with problems like you speak of could miss them. Im sure youll get it fixed eventually.

I will say so far the story is really good plotwise, but it is a bit of a pet peeve whenever i see authors use the anime's more visual gags in writing as if they transfer on a 1:1 scale. There are better ways to portray awkward silence than the "sweat drop" for example. Id try writing as if there were no visual equivilant to reference from, seperate it from the anime and make it unique in your own writing style.

Best of luck!

nevermind

ok atleast you didnt copy there apperances

real original names. great story glad i found it

You can't count cards in poker, only in blackjack. Sorry to criticize, but I am a gambling fanatic.

Boring

I said I was going to stop reading for now but now its 5 AM

I hate you

I found your story a bit late but this is very well written.

Great job :)

Yeah let me just say that Betas Don't usually go around Changing things...

I can't help but feel this next chapter is probably too aptly named...