Reviews for Naruto Hatake
redeyehawk23 chapter 5 . 10/10
should've given naruto a mask like kakashi to hide the whiskers
aydenfischer2020 chapter 4 . 5/28
you shouldn't have told us you took out the anonymous review sp you could cech the people if it was not nice then you could have reported them or something
Bobcat Sage chapter 63 . 5/12
did you ever continue this
EMachado04 chapter 2 . 5/8
This seems to be a good fic but I can't say that it aged that well, as it was first published in 2007, there is a lot of common knowledge that is missing, like Kushina being the previous jinchuuriki and the like. If you can understand and accept this, I think this would be a good read, if you are like me and have a problem with this type of thing then you should move on.
Guest chapter 13 . 3/19
I really hope this isn't a harem.
Mahnya chapter 63 . 3/12
lily chapter 3 . 11/23/2022
I love the Bleach reference
Mehy chapter 1 . 8/29/2022
Me encanta tu historia, y me da ánimos para aprender inglés.
Stuke112 chapter 1 . 8/21/2022
I’m not gonna lie this feels weird I feel like you should have done those hinata and Naruto scenes when they were like in part 2 them making out at 12 years old is so weird
Stuke112 chapter 1 . 8/19/2022
There’s really one huge problem I got this series is way to drawn out literally it took about 43 chapters to be in the chunnin exams this is an amazing story but the drawn out scenes were getting annoying
Sothniz chapter 26 . 7/19/2022
Ok so your story is really good and I already know it’s complete but you have an issue with run on sentences exhe must be really strong then… I’ve gotta catch up then!” As apprised to just I’ve gotta catch up it’d sound much more natural that way and overall more smooth but other than that the only issue I’ve had is how long you spent on naruto’s academy days and the days before he was even in the academy as it doesn’t provide TOO much to the plot, I feel like all of that could have been resolved in ten chapters overall but that’s just my opinion
EVIL-SAGE chapter 28 . 7/8/2022
yea that had been my first thought that kakashi would use the rasengan as a chakra training not for the jutsu, smart actually.
Geurtg chapter 1 . 6/15/2022
Muy bueno
geoslim21 chapter 27 . 6/11/2022
hate that you have sasuke learning rasengan. he is still a dick like in canon. same with sakura. even though she is better in this than canon I doubt se has the chakra for it.
Giyuusimp432 chapter 9 . 5/10/2022
the ending of this chapter is quite bad
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