Reviews for Naruto Hatake
lily chapter 3 . 11/23/2022
I love the Bleach reference
Mehy chapter 1 . 8/29/2022
Me encanta tu historia, y me da ánimos para aprender inglés.
Stuke112 chapter 1 . 8/21/2022
I’m not gonna lie this feels weird I feel like you should have done those hinata and Naruto scenes when they were like in part 2 them making out at 12 years old is so weird
Stuke112 chapter 1 . 8/19/2022
There’s really one huge problem I got this series is way to drawn out literally it took about 43 chapters to be in the chunnin exams this is an amazing story but the drawn out scenes were getting annoying
Zinthos001 chapter 26 . 7/19/2022
Ok so your story is really good and I already know it’s complete but you have an issue with run on sentences exhe must be really strong then… I’ve gotta catch up then!” As apprised to just I’ve gotta catch up it’d sound much more natural that way and overall more smooth but other than that the only issue I’ve had is how long you spent on naruto’s academy days and the days before he was even in the academy as it doesn’t provide TOO much to the plot, I feel like all of that could have been resolved in ten chapters overall but that’s just my opinion
EVIL-SAGE chapter 28 . 7/8/2022
yea that had been my first thought that kakashi would use the rasengan as a chakra training not for the jutsu, smart actually.
Geurtg chapter 1 . 6/15/2022
Muy bueno
geoslim21 chapter 27 . 6/11/2022
hate that you have sasuke learning rasengan. he is still a dick like in canon. same with sakura. even though she is better in this than canon I doubt se has the chakra for it.
Giyuusimp432 chapter 9 . 5/10/2022
the ending of this chapter is quite bad
Ezzie Valentine chapter 28 . 5/4/2022
I don't know how long ago you left that message about your spelling and punctuation, but I have to say that I've seen a LOT worse. This story has been really interesting and you've done a great job building your version of the Naruto world.
Uchiha sauske chapter 63 . 4/6/2022
Extraordinary mind-blowing Fantastic
ida bagus ngurah sathya dharma chapter 27 . 4/2/2022
damn, is it just me that felt kakashi teach the three of them rasengan is just wrong, it's really cool in canon how just a few people could use it, so the jutsu look rrally special so yeahh... weird
ida bagus ngurah sathya dharma chapter 4 . 4/2/2022
i hope he become a ninjutsu specialist because of his large chakra
Guest chapter 7 . 3/21/2022
Why did you choose naruhina that's a make or break for me
setjjjjjjjjjjjjj chapter 1 . 3/13/2022
great
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