I love the Bleach reference

Me encanta tu historia, y me da ánimos para aprender inglés.

I’m not gonna lie this feels weird I feel like you should have done those hinata and Naruto scenes when they were like in part 2 them making out at 12 years old is so weird

There’s really one huge problem I got this series is way to drawn out literally it took about 43 chapters to be in the chunnin exams this is an amazing story but the drawn out scenes were getting annoying

Ok so your story is really good and I already know it’s complete but you have an issue with run on sentences exhe must be really strong then… I’ve gotta catch up then!” As apprised to just I’ve gotta catch up it’d sound much more natural that way and overall more smooth but other than that the only issue I’ve had is how long you spent on naruto’s academy days and the days before he was even in the academy as it doesn’t provide TOO much to the plot, I feel like all of that could have been resolved in ten chapters overall but that’s just my opinion

yea that had been my first thought that kakashi would use the rasengan as a chakra training not for the jutsu, smart actually.

Muy bueno

hate that you have sasuke learning rasengan. he is still a dick like in canon. same with sakura. even though she is better in this than canon I doubt se has the chakra for it.

the ending of this chapter is quite bad

I don't know how long ago you left that message about your spelling and punctuation, but I have to say that I've seen a LOT worse. This story has been really interesting and you've done a great job building your version of the Naruto world.

Extraordinary mind-blowing Fantastic

damn, is it just me that felt kakashi teach the three of them rasengan is just wrong, it's really cool in canon how just a few people could use it, so the jutsu look rrally special so yeahh... weird

i hope he become a ninjutsu specialist because of his large chakra

Why did you choose naruhina that's a make or break for me

great