while no story is perfect you did a good job so far!

Only three chapters in and I can already tell this story is shit. Dropped.

Itachi was only five years old when Naruto was born and didn't awaken the sharingan until he was eight. Also I'm glad to see you're going with the cliche of making Fugaku into a one dimensional bad guy. Really shows you're creativity as an author.

1. Kakashi has silver/grey hair, not white 2. Jiraiya considered Orochimaru to be his best friend before he left the village 3. Kakashi was already an ANBU when the incident happened

Great story but I do wish you would of ended it with Tsunade being found already and Naruto made a chunin at least. That is if you have plans on making him one so early. I look forward to getting started on the story you already have going for the sequel to this. Good job at how you have the story going so far and I’m glad it’s a naruhina paring as well, other wise I would of never read it if it wasn’t lol.

haaaaaaaaaa

such a wonderfull story! as i already said for so many times, i love how you balanced everything in your story. i wished Hinata would have more action tough. Still..
totally love this story. and i will read the sequel right away! lucky me

now... if only Kishi-sensei picture Sakura and developed her like you did here, I can become her fan. She was so cool and mature. And that way, Sasuke finally start to acknowledge her. really beautiful development.

of course, as Hinata fan, i also love seing you develop her character to be very strong in her own way. I can't wait to see what she can do now.

oh wow... so intense! i just thougt, that perhaps, adding Kakashi to this battle would give different result. but apparently, i was wrong, again.
i really have to say, you really are good in balancing things up: action, fluff, drama, and not to forget, smooth character development. I was surprised to realized that i really like your version of sakura. she deserve this kind of development. and of course, totally love the NaruHina development as well... kinda didn't expect you're more of a NaruSaku supporter, yet could make NaruHina relationship develop this smooth.

though, i have to state that sometimes, the typoo and lack of marks, make me need to reread the sentence several times to understand it.
nevertheless... a great story so far.

onto next chapters...

oh wow... kishimoto never expose Hinata's mother, and i have to say, you picture her well. and, yes, i sniffled. this chapter was so sad... nice writting.

awww... i love how you picture the young Naruto and Hinata interact each other in this chapter. on the other hand, it's interesting too to see how young sasuke growing up.
right... onto next chapters...

interesting story! I wouldn't have thought Kakashi to be able to play a father role. but... apparently he could. and the reason behind his action also been made realistic. I'm eager to read how the story will be told, with little twist here and there...
now... onto next chapters...

Itachi seems really out of character from cannon. More like Madara

I love it when Naruto Fanfic writers add in the “Eternally Youthful Genjutsu” of Lee and Gai. Those two, and other people’s reactions to them (especially outsiders’) are always good for a laugh... and Sasuke catching it with the Sharingan... XD
-CB

Loving what I’ll reading so far. I adore the inclusion of the ninken, and especially the little scene with Pakkun’s soft paws (little details really build).
Kudos.
-CB