Interesting beginning, I want more.

this is really interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!

Too bad it doesn't get much attention.

A year and a half since you published, and there isn't enough to tell how good the story is... :D You should update.

Update. WHen!

I wonder if you'll be more original this time than everyone else and NOT give Ranma a curse?

Please update this is good idea so will you continue

Animated teddy bears? Shades of the Tenchi story, "Daughter of Darkness". Connection?

Good beginning, but i'm surprised from seeing only 2 reviews... it must be the m rating (filtered by default in the search engine)

I would suggest lowering it, since a cross with NANOHA probaby won't include blood gore or adult contents :)

I like it so far.

cool. Are you going to make use of the wind temple later in the story and does it somehow tie into nanoha strikers. hm no big spelling errors from what I can see, so your good in that department. Found a problem you might want to correct later

“ Of course it is! Thrust me boy I’ve got the scars to make sure I don’t try that again. Ether of them.”

Thrust should probably switched to Trust.

And Ether should be Either.

those are the only ones that i noticed on my 2nd glance. Thanxs for the story.