Reviews for Scratch the Surface
Peighton Sorrel chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
I've deleted the beginning to this review so many times because I can't even begin to describe how sick and beautiful this story was. It was so amazing and it's so hard to form words for it. Jeff and Adam were the best character choices for this story, there should definitely be more stories like this. If you created a series my God my head would explode from being so overwhelmed with joy. This story thrilled me to the tips of my toes and back, scared me so much that I was checking out my window for Jeff and Adam or someone just like them, and excited so much that when I realized he was going back to his old ways I cried tears of enthusiasm. One of the greatest horror stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading.
Rhiannamator chapter 18 . 5/30/2011
I have no clue if your ever look at this anymore, but i had to praise this wonderful story. It has immediately launched into one of my top faves. It's amazing, how deep you got into Jeff's mind, how perfectly everything was explained. I love when an author takes the time to make the insanity make sense. The characters were a perfect choice, bc i can see how Jeff can have an utterly insane side, how Adam can have everything together. (Also they're my boys, but that's besides the point) They do seem that way in real life sometimes. I must admit, i didn't see the end coming, but once i looked back it made perfect sense. And i'm glad for the 'happy' ending. Now that Jeff is stronger, i bet they can stay together and play forever...
Always Straightedge and proud chapter 9 . 10/17/2010
this story reminds me of the one song called monster.
Terrahfry chapter 18 . 10/17/2010
Holy shit, this fic tore me a new one. Oh my god, this could be a fucking movie. Brilliant, amazing story.
DobbysWerewolf chapter 18 . 9/4/2010
hey, just wanted to say that i love your story :] very rarely do i find one that i like. so thanks. it was amazing :]. lol the whole time i was reading it i was like.. pfft. hes probably not even gonna be real, but i like how you left it open at the end, so that people could just decide for themselves. :) once again thanks for making such an awesome story.
Nialon chapter 15 . 7/5/2009
This story is amazing. I love how you've built the relationship between Jeff and Adam, and I've never seen one like it before. And I love Jeff's thought process. You explain it in a way that makes sense. At least to me, haha. Anyway, I loved reading this. )
Superstar89 chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
i realy like this story
Shamaness1171 chapter 18 . 8/15/2008
Hi... I thought this story was great. It took me two days to read it between taking care of my kids and my house. But after reading the whole thing, the first thing that came to my mind was the movie Fight Club. It was just like that, but with more killing... I've read all your other stories, too. this one was definitely different, but it was good. You should do another one.
RKO.I.F chapter 18 . 6/15/2008
OMG Great Story,I was looking on your page today and I seen this story and at first I didnt know what necrophilia or however you spell it was so I looked it up and Im like thats sick people actually do that?They it got me hooked and I really enjoyed this story a lot!It is now a favorite of Story!D
Shadowcat chapter 18 . 4/4/2008
This really is one of the best stories I've read in long while.

The plot was so well thought out and the characters were amazing.

You're a really great writer. Loved the ending, you didn't see it coming at all, amazing.

Keep writing more stories, you rock!
Saall chapter 18 . 4/1/2008
Wow, that is seriously one of the best stories I have read in a long time. You really put a lot of effort into the work and it really shows.

I love the idea of Adam. He reminds me sort of of the Dark Passenger from Dexter.

I hope that you continue to write such amazing pieces.
rawambition chapter 18 . 3/30/2008
Damn Shanny!

I was messin around and happened to look at your profile and remembered this story. the last time I saw it it had only 5 chapters, now it's finished, so I thought I'd just read a few chapters. Well here it is about 3 hours later (give or take) and I finished it, and it's now 3 in the morning. But I couldn't go to bed before I had a chance to review ya!

This story was so twisted, I'm horrified by it, and at the same time amazed and intreaged by it. it has the perfect mix of things to keep the readers guessin' you really are a fantastic writter. and the steph part at the end was genius, a nice ending that was bloody brilliant. this whole story was just a great and suspenseful peice of fiction.

I would write more but sadly I can bearly keep my eyes open!lol so I appologize for any spelling errors or if I don't make sense, lol Good night/morning shanny!

With love,

Jaime
Kiss2Kill chapter 18 . 1/30/2008
I'm speechless.

That has to be of the most disturbing yet most amazing stories I've ever read. There's so much going on that you just have to sit back and take it in.

Steph being tied up while he's talking to Adam is one of the best things you've put in the story. After everything, he's back to his old ways.

There's still a few things I'm not sure on, and if you could tell me how you saw it, that would be great, but I can honestly say that I have found this story to be perfect.

I can see it published and on the shelves.

It's that damn good.
grafx.ALLURE chapter 18 . 1/18/2008
That was crazy!

I'm confused but I understand. So he's crazy, Adam's not real & he's back to his old ways now he's got Steph gagged & tied to the mattress. When I read that last part, my mouth dropped! I did not see that coming. He IS crazy, hot damn!

Last time I left this was at chapter 13, so reading the rest in 1 go was like watching a movie.

Jeff Norman Bates & that broken down house he has is his motel.

Speaking of crazy people, Layla doesn't believe he did anything wrong, now is she a real person or did he make her up too. Who knows, maybe she's just as crazy as he is.

I think this was so well written, it doesn't need a sequel.

A perfect psychological thriller.
Breathe Artistic chapter 18 . 1/12/2008
Wow.

I can't even begin to think up words enough to compliment this. Every bit of it has been amazing. And it's really something that makes you think. The whole thing was so well written that it just captivated the attention. You did a fantastic job.

I also have to say, "Almost Easy" by Avenged Sevenfold (definitely one of my total favorite bands) was a fantastic choice for Jeff to be listening to at the end. I never realized how much the song could be comparable to how Jeff felt with the situation until I saw you used it and really though about it. But it does. The lyrics mesh so well together, its unbelievable.

You did an amazing job on this!

Brittany
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