Reviews for Red Velvet or Nothing
sea-salt kisses chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Oh my god. The ending made me cry. But this was so excellent, oh my goodness. Thank you so much for writing it.
Sayonara7 chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
THE END. MY HEART SHATTERED! ARGH it was seriously so fluffy and cute and I was awww-ing so bad but then the end had to go and utterly reduce my heart to a shamble of crumbles! IT WAS SO SAD. It made the whole cuteness of the story bittersweet, which I love, because angst is my fav thing along with fluff xD I'm super happy when writers mix it up and their stories become bittersweet! I think you did an amazing job with this! I think Roxas/Pence is the cutest ship, this has just made me ship them moar xD
Beansxx chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
BAW THE ENDING IS SAD! DDDD;

It was so beautiful, I love Pence. ;_;
The Anonymite chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
lkjaw;efjalskjfdeal;kgjwlads that's just meeeeean, reeeallyyyyyyyy, here I am, thinking it's the most Unicorn Puking Rainbows-ish thing I've read, and that there's no way that any of Kingdom Hearts' typical depressing side can seep in, and there you go, making it canon. Again. AND IT'S STILL FANTASTIC.

ihateyou.

Except that I so don't.

Also, sorry for filling your inbox with reviews.

And yes, I am reading everything in your gallery under Kingdom Hearts.

- Anon
Stardust Roses chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
In all honesty i'm not really a huge fan of gay pairings but i really like your story. It's very well written. Nice job!
acct no longer in use chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
I love this There needs to be more Pence/Roxas, it's soo cute. 3

But... the ending DX I hate it that Roxas dissappears. I don't really like Pence/Olette to be honest. x.x
JuugosGrrrl15 chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
I think that I understand the ending, Roxas is replaced with Olette in the first day of school. Right?

Oh I loved Pence to begin with, but your characterization is wonderful! I never thought of Roxas/Pence before, but now I think it's a new pairing for me. I love the story!
Ellipsis the Great chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
D8 The end part made me so sad...but, that aside, it was a brilliant ending, really. Never thought of these two as a pairing before, but you wrote them really adorably. I love it!

-EtheG
nameless reviewer chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
“I blame the cupcakes,” Roxas says seriously. “You fed me too many of them and now I’m gay.”

GREATEST LINE EVER.
XxXStarxDustXxX chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
Oh my gosh, that was absolutely adorable. RoxasxPence? I honestly never thought of this pairing. It's really cute! I hope you write more of this couple soon.
ShadowAmicasta chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
*Splutters* I can't actually stop smiling at this, and I feel bad about it because of how bittersweet it actually is, because IT DOESN'T ACTUALLY HAPPEN! And it should!

Also, I adore that the details of everything goes do far back. And that Roxas doesn't like chocolate. It's just so like him to reject the mainstream. But the best part of the whole thing; Pence trying to make sea-salt cupcakes. Cutest thing ever!
Lovely Waffles chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
I remember reading this some time ago and it's only after I re-read it do I get the ending. It only proves that people with A.D.D. are overpopulating the world. I really liked your story and I hope you don't mind me fav you ;
kupocchi chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
The very last part of this story completely flew over my stupid head but then I realized it and it hit me like a ton of bricks. Ouch ouch ouch. You ended such a fluffy story so sadly; poor Pence.
ElectricFedora chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
like the story also i am confused by the ending i dont have the nerve to play the game i cry alot just from clips i think id like never stop crying if i played the game
Kumquat chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
Ok, seriously, way to go for the total heartbreak. As if I wasn't sad enough about Roxas disappearing in the first place. But, really, very nice
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