Reviews for Birth of a Legend
tanakaL chapter 11 . 4/13/2012
Ok I love your story. I also like the fact that hinata has a bit of a naughty side but is still shy. All in all everything is wonderful keep up the good work!
Suave Jiraiya chapter 11 . 9/4/2010
This is a good story, but its been over two years since you've updated it. If you've abandoned the story then you should show some courtesy and take it down so new readers won't get sucked into reading a story that will never be finished.
WolfLord04 chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
are you going to get back to this story?
Datgie chapter 11 . 6/4/2010
I just wanted to thank you for a great read. I would appologise for not reviewing your earlier chapters, but you only have yourself to blame for making rhe story too interesting to stop when i dont have to lol. I love how you portray the characters, especially Naruto. His and Kyuubis interaction had my cracking up on many occasions. i also have to say that hinata is much better when not stuttering constantly. I have gotten rather tired of trying to read stutter-speach in the other fics on this site. i also enjoy the interactions of naruto and his clones. i do hope you plan on continuing this story because it would be a shame if such a wonderfull story stayed unfinished.


P.S. i do appologise for not reviewing more.
quickreader93 chapter 11 . 5/5/2010
Absolutly amazing. Honestly I don't think you can improve that much. You have done an a brilliant job with the characters. They blend really well... I can't wait to read more!
foxmage chapter 11 . 4/7/2010
Please more. I...must...have...MORE!
foxmage chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
please more!
MsQueenWitch chapter 5 . 2/28/2010
YOu know i like the story bnut making hinta a manipulative bitch makes me start disliking the story
Moriko no Kitsune Ryu chapter 11 . 7/5/2009
update this story please it is very good
Gravity The Wizard chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
Please Continue!
Vallavarayan chapter 11 . 4/26/2009
nice fights!

i hope this is not abandoned! hope you updte sometime soon
ToxicVixy chapter 11 . 4/8/2009
OMG this story is the greatest in my opinion.
pyro688 chapter 11 . 3/5/2009
this is a great story i really like how u made kyuubi a big facror in narutos life

o and i really think u should make naruto and anko meet ...notice my name

this is the best chapter so far
Koji-Magnificent Destruction chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
Hells, yes! I agree completly Damn Uchiha SasGAY!
garsdal chapter 11 . 1/19/2009
ahh, pyro's in the makeing:D

*introduces the three of them to anko*
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