Reviews for Envy
mmyy chapter 2 . 9/30/2007
Great chapter, great story! Update asap!
Faye Dartmouth chapter 2 . 9/30/2007
YAY for limp!Sam! And sick Sam. Somehow I feel like Sam avoiding the diner might not be enough for our dear boy.

I'm thrilled to see you writing :)
Trish62 chapter 2 . 9/30/2007
Nice story. I like your take on Sam at that age, I think he still would be offering to help out and wouldn't let his distaste for hunting come before his family. And love Dean, balancing his family and his extra-curricular needs...
1Pagan3 chapter 2 . 9/30/2007
Rose is an evil little *itch isn't she? Poor Sammy thinking it's no big deal not suspecting he's in someone's crosshairs, and Dean truly believing that everythings ok with his new girlfriend.

Jeez, just how bad is it going to get for the Winchester's before they realize whats happening?

Update soon.
lelann37 chapter 2 . 9/30/2007
hmm, very interesting so far...can't wait to see what rose does. and can't wait to see brother bonding
Nessie chapter 2 . 9/30/2007
Dont know what to say. Great chappie. I really dont like Rose...I want to kick poison Sam just to spent time with Dean and now he is sick(I love sick!Sam storys:)). I dont want to imagine what she will do next to take Dean away from his brother! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Xdaisy chainX chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
awesome start, loved the whole basing a fic around the croatoan quote thing

awesome, love things which tie into the show, give them a bit of backbone

anyways this looks like its going to shape up into an awesome fic

update soon!

heather03nmg chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
So I've read the first chapter as promised so you know what you owe me...I'll be waiting!

Very enjoyable, love teen Winchesters. You got the broodiness and hormones down perfectly.

So a waitress poisoning Sammy to get more time withe Dean. While I admire her tenacity, it's a bit too devious for me.

I'm withholding cookies until I get my love in return.
cavetrollgrl chapter 1 . 9/26/2007
what's Rose doing to Sam? Dean'll be pretty mad if he finds out someone hurt his brother, but Rose seems too blind to figure that out. hopefully Dean'll wake up soon to facts. please keep the story coming
sendintheclowns chapter 1 . 9/26/2007
Love the brotherly banter. I don't know about Sam, but if I got sick right after eating a meal at a diner I'd think twice about eating there again. I'll cut him some slack, though, because he's a kid.

Can't wait to see what Rose is up to here :)
Nana56 chapter 1 . 9/26/2007
Great start, hon! She's making Sammy sick on purpose, isn't she? Glad to see this up today!
lauriena chapter 1 . 9/26/2007
interesting... poor sammy, now the question is whats the deal with the ice tea.

cant wait to read more what an interesting setup
daisymaygirl1 chapter 1 . 9/26/2007
I love Teen!Winchester fics and if Sammy is hurt/sick in them then that's even better. That Rose is definitely dangerously bad news...I can see trouble ahead for Sammy and Dean. Which is always great fun to read about. LOL!

I thought the image of Sammy with his mop of hair peeking out over the top of his history book was just wonderful. Very much looking forward to reading more.
Nessie chapter 1 . 9/26/2007
Fuuny...I asked if you have an idea for a new story and now you have one out. I like it a lot especially because it is a story when they are young!

What did Rose do to Sam?...I dont like her...Im sure I will have a good reason to dislike her later in your story even more!

Dean is playing the big bro role really good. I love it when he is so concerned about Sam. Cant wait for more!
Still Awesome2009 chapter 1 . 9/26/2007
Rose is creepy, what did she do to sam. Update soon, want to see where this is going
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