Reviews for That Girl
Jaylonni Love chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
What did he do o.o

Loved it

Jaylonni Love
Valentine35 chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Great details. Great story. I LOVED IT!
RUNOS SISTER chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
silverstargazer chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
,why is the title 'that girl'?
DestinyRuby chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
It didn't suck. It was quite good. I liked the way you described the chracters, it's quite on character.
naash chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
the romance was sudden cause he was like so mean but i do love it. i love the unexpected
Allie chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
I find it didn't suck at all. It was really rather good! :)
FenixPhoenix chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
Very nice. I especially like the plot. And the fact that you made Tenten strong. Good job.

My only problem was one inconsistency. When Tenten was about to be tortured. Konan asked to know who the two Hyuugas were, right?

So, when she is being tortured in front of everyone, why the hell would she call Hinata by name? After all, she was rendering information she shouldn't, right?

Anyhow, other than that, this was great. Good job.
ELunamoon chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
Neji is quite OC-ish but he rox! The ending was epicly perfect! I liked how u used konan as the main akatsuki member ...even if she died in teh end.
Fake Bliss chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
that was sweet
JFKDLA chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
Dragonic-blast chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
If it sucked? YOU MUST BE CRAZY! it was AWESOME!

how could you ever think it SUCKED?
jadedsiren chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
Neji should have got to fight more and you mentioned so many characters that ended up doing nothing. Many still consider Hinata to be weak but it was mentioned that she is now the strongest on her squad and still excelling so give ma girl a bit more credit although you did make her endure torture With that aside I can tell you that I liked it really liked it I'm going to check to see if you have any more stories since I'm reading this so late.
sophia666 chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
Great writing. I loved it, especially Tenten and Neji. and Neji's line:

“That is something only spouses may know.”

and him saying he'll hand himself into the Akatsuki if she doesn't marry him.
Gaara's Minion chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
it was really good i loved the tortore not because i don't like tenten but because it was really well described but the ending was really good to it was an awsome story
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