Reviews for House of Potter
SapphireKiddTaeyeon chapter 14 . 3/13
this is great
csheila chapter 9 . 11/19/2021
So Malory is not surprised by the Black heirship?
csheila chapter 8 . 11/18/2021
Time to pack Ron into a box.

I love the info about the classes, even Snape
csheila chapter 6 . 11/18/2021
Yeah, Rob can’t help himself. I have aDHD and he probably has dyslexia. But he very confrontational and not bright. Takes after his mom but she is smarte
csheila chapter 5 . 11/18/2021
Nice interactions you even got Ron to take a hard class
csheila chapter 3 . 11/18/2021
Always a boy. I love it.

The rest was interesting, especially the different magics
csheila chapter 2 . 11/18/2021
Great set up. It’s good to see Sirius taking proactive steps
csheila chapter 1 . 11/18/2021
Fruitcake?! But if you are hungry.

This looks good and many have recommended it
Saissa chapter 14 . 9/10/2021
Aprt from the occasional poor english phrase, this was a wonderful story.

I am very sad that it was not continued!

Several plot lines have been set up very nicely!
Saissa chapter 10 . 9/10/2021
Does the fact that you are also writing Bollywood stories mean that you are from Asia and thus English is not your native language?

I ask because there are some words showing up in the last few chapters that are not being used correctly.

When harry receives a letter and package from sirius, the word used is came or became, when it should be received.

Exited is used when the correct spelling should be EXCITED.

"he wouldnt realise before hours after the staff meeting..." Before is wrong - the correct word is FOR.

I know this story is now abandoned - and it was shaping up to be a good story - but the incorrect use of english is jarring. Everytime I come across a wrong word, it jolts me out of the story, and I have to find the right word in my head so that I may continue reading.

I dont think anything will happen since this story has not been updated for over 4 years, but still, I thought I should make an effort to review.
Natalya Shae chapter 14 . 8/17/2021
Brilliant. I really love this doc and can’t wait to see where it goes
PKnight18 chapter 13 . 8/3/2021
Story is great, you kept calling the dragons sentiment though and you meant sentient.
potterlover chapter 14 . 7/30/2021
heyyyy
please update...
luv the story
Guest chapter 3 . 5/28/2021
Can change his gender ? Yeah I’m out
mariejackson154 chapter 14 . 5/10/2021
I'm liking the book so far hope u continue when u can
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