|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Trip to the Past|
| MimiTaylor chapter 6 . 3/22
I am loving this so much and just had to pause in my reading to let you know. I've read too many time traveling fanfics that made it seem as though Harry had a '"c'est la vie' attitude about losing what he had when starting over. Harry's grief for Ginny and the kids is heartbreaking but makes the story so much more genuine. I just wanted to give you kudos for that. Now I'm off for more!
| Guest chapter 34 . 3/19
I enjoyed this story very much. In particular, that Ron was portrayed as I'd thought he should be and that Neville was better. Dumbeldore also was treated as he should have been. Tanks again for the story.
| NatNicole chapter 34 . 3/19
This fic is bloody AWESOME!
| greenprisoner chapter 1 . 3/19
this chapter is just so nice and relieving. snape is a character that everyone hates or turns into some mushy mentor-like figure or some angsty weak teen . and your take is just so un-bias feeling and rips every argument to shreds. it's nice
| Guest chapter 34 . 3/6
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| liz.barden chapter 34 . 3/6
Very good story!
| CarelesslyCamouflaged chapter 23 . 3/5
I do like most of your story so far but I have to say that I find your Sirius and even your James very very VERY irritating and it makes me a little nauseous every time Harry panders to them.. It is understandable because logically Harry would feel attachment and loyalty to them, but as the reader and based on your portrayal of them I find it very hard to relate to that.
| lilyluna43 chapter 30 . 3/3
OMG ! NOBODY expected this ! This is sooo cool !
| Svenion chapter 17 . 3/1
Why doesn't the idiot just flash into her room under his cloak and take the diary while she's sleeping? Seems like you're stretching this out for no reason.
| Rising Phoenix-82 chapter 34 . 2/26
| heirofwisdom chapter 5 . 2/24
I think your theme is good, but I dont wish to continue your story any longer. This is why: your dialogue is horrific. There is a thing called "contractions". So, instead of having a character say, "I am okay" you can have them say, "I'm okay" so that your character doesn't sound like a robot. Though, this story was made in 2007, so I guess you have improved since then.
| Red-CLOUD-001 chapter 30 . 2/23
Harry is soooo naive... How does he think that messing with time won't cause unknowns to come into being? All he had to do was appear, show his memories to Dumbledore, the order and Snape and then organise a full-on attack on voldermort - a "shadow war" if you would - silently manipulating voldermort's forces until they are destroyed utterly.
It might sound cold and brutal, but manipulating the multiple other powers in the world to kill off voldermort, while making possible contestants to riddle's power rise within the death-eaters, and putting kill bounties on voldermort, would also significantly help harry... morals can go to hell, this is war we are talking about - voldermort is nothing but an insane, psychopathic and murdering terrorist. So also contact the muggles to launch an air-strike or something, as far as I know missiles and bullets haven't been fully experienced by the magical society for over 50 plus years!
Last point... my way of dueling would be to spell-chain multiple dark, light and neutral death curses and other lethal magiks to kill him off - maybe even find a soul magic that ignores horcruxes destroy the main soul, and then clean up the remainders afterwards! Elemental based magic like lightning and fire is very potent, and over-powered blasting and destroyer curses at the floor, walls can be used as well as a "game changer" - maybe even lobb fyndfire at him?
Why is harry either naive and even stupid, or grossly over-powered - he never seems to be portrayed as having the following traits together: intelligence, wisdom to use it, un-biased, emotional-intelligence... ect. If I went back in time, I would take an aging potion and then learn as much as possible - voldermort only ever appears becuase his nemesis does as well...
Enough for now...
| anwesha chapter 34 . 2/14
THIS IS THE MOST TRULY SOULFUL HARRY POTTER TIME TRAVEL STORY EVER!
| X chapter 23 . 2/8
I'm sure that many readers have corrected your error by now - so here's another one: James Potter's mother was born Dorea Black, so Harry IS related to the Blacks and is, I think, Sirius' second cousin once removed (I'm shit at figuring out familial relationships, but that should at least be close.) That would also mean, since Sirius and Narcissa (along with her sisters) are cousins, that Draco is also related to Harry.
| whrr.trudy chapter 34 . 2/6
aww :) I loved your story, think this is my favorite harry falls back in time I've read :)