|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Trip to the Past|
| 553Colinm chapter 8 . 4h
only about five spells are shown with priori incantem
| Bronze chapter 5 . 5h
That was great! Some parts sad, some parts funny. I hope you included whatever Sirius and Remus do to the Dursley's. That should be good for lots of laughs.
| Bronze chapter 4 . 6h
WHO SANK MY BATTLESHIP?! That's pretty much what Dumbasadoor is going to cry when he realizes Harry I his little plaything anymore. Wonderful story. I'm so enjoying reading it.
| Skattered chapter 34 . 8/23
Just stumbled upon this fic. It is one of the better Good guy snape fic. You've taken the cliche and made it so believable that i may as well have been canon. Well done!
| RarissimaAvis chapter 34 . 8/19
Nice story and nice ending. I'm surprised by how well you managed to squeeze four years of stuff into 34 chapters! But I'm a bit miffed by how your epilogue failed to mention what happened to other people, like the Slytherins and Draco, and whether the twins did end up having the Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes business again.
| Hainbuche chapter 34 . 8/15
die gechichte war wirklich sehr schön zu lesen. du schreibst toll. hoffe, ich kann noch mehr von dir lesen. lg hayne
| digbygreen chapter 34 . 8/13
Great story! Thanks for writing.
| Guest chapter 34 . 8/10
Pliz write more!
| AngelPrincess97 chapter 34 . 8/8
Fantastic, absolutely fantastic! This was a wild roller coaster from beginning to ending and I enjoyed every second of it. I loved how Harry despite everything did the best he could to change the future even sacrificing his own future to achieve a relatively peaceful end to the second war before it could actually begin. I absolutely loved how you didn't just sweep the loss of his future children to the side you mentioned them often enough that I felt his pain and loss but not so much that it became annoying. I am definitely going to reread this again in the future and will be checking out some of your other works as well. Cheers!
| Lizard LIZZY chapter 23 . 8/6
I love your story, it's different from a lot of the other time travel fanfics I have read. One thing I really would like to point out to you is that in canon, Harry actually is related to Sirus and the Malfoys. His paternal grandmother is Dorea Black who married Charlus Potter. She is Sirus and Narcissa's great aunt.
| asingh123 chapter 1 . 8/5
I know this review wouldn't matter nd is too late... And though it seem like a flame to your story... But it is just my opinion...
Potrqying Snape as some betrayed, giving kind if person really makes me feel sick...
This is the same man who only cared of the consequences of his actions and then defected, when he figured out that child of prophecy is Lily's son... Not Harry... Not Potter's son... But Lily's
Think abt this, if Lily would have survived that night, nd say for a sec that harry died...oh and Lily knew who gave the prophecy... What would have been the result... A crying lily embracing Snape... Or a widow and a mother who lost everything withbonly revenge left in her...
Snape is one pitiful man whose only got orgasms after mentally torturing students especially Harry Potter(ah! forgot the mind rape didn't you)
People really have this... thing... Where Snape is considered an 'Anti' Hero for being a spy, the person who suffered all his life because his one 'true' love died, nd then he finally died at the hands of his master..
Snape should be seen as the person who mentally abused students and specifically targeted Harry(even though he knew he was the initiator of Harry's parents murder, or maybe he targetted Harry becoz LILY died and HARRY LIVED)...
He MIND RAPED Harry...
He could have been istrumental in getting Sirius Black a trial or if he wasn't such a dunderhead, he could even have helped Sirius being saved...
And his death, what was so heroic abt it, he gave the memory of him lusting after Harry's mother...
And him causing the death of Harry's parents...
Of him still lusting after Harry's mother when he asked Voldei to leave Lily alive ...
Then giving Harry the memory of how Harry needs to die, and how both he and dumbles were too much of a cowards to give the info abt Harry's horcrux when they were near death...
Nd then dying by still lusting after Harry's mother, trying to find Lily's eyes...
I respect your opinion, I truly do, even though I think how wrong it is but in my opinion...
Snape was number 3 bastard of the hp-verse, right after Dumbles and Pettigrew...
At least Voldemort was a straight arrow of a VILLAIN...
| Amalthia chapter 34 . 8/2
I enjoyed your story!
| Abby Nesoya chapter 34 . 8/1
What a wonderful story! Thank you for persevering with this! It was well worth all of your hard work!
| mckertis chapter 34 . 7/25
Pretty primitive writing. Not too bad for someone of high school age, i suppose.
| blood-doll-aishiteru chapter 34 . 7/21