This right here almost made me lose interest in the story ... First, because Harry being an experient auror, would not made that mistake of using his official wand instead of the spare.. Then, this whole thing of Snape knowing about Harry being from the future is killer for me...

Thanks for sharing. 3

Thanks for a really great read! Very Nicely done! This one definitely hits the Keepers file!

SIGH...

You had a good thing going up until that point. O don't mind stories where a writer has a hard on for Snape but when y'all completely make a very battle hardened, powerful, hyper alert, acutely aware Harry (especially one from the future) have someone easily get the drop on him...it takes all the fucking energy out of the story. It just does. Because Snape can catch him unswares but, let me guess, Dumbledore won't be able to? That breaks something already implied within the story. I'll have to bid this farewell at this point. Sucks too because I was genuinely interested in this story. But Snape pulling one on THIS Harry makes as much sense as Harry getting with Ginny in the actual series.

Bullshit, no way that just happened so easily
Harry has all his magic, all his mind shields and they are gone like poof
No, that's Simppy all plot and plot armour, bull fucking shit, I don't care if it's done next chapter, you very well should have obliviated snape

Fabulous story - very well plotted and enthralling from beginning to end. Thank you for sharing it.

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Don’t listen or feel bad about what some idiots write about your story! Critic’s like these go into a story looking for ways to bash it , not with an open mind looking for entertainment. I say good work!

Whats his plan here? He wants to stop the basilisk and Ginny. He waits month until the first attack with the argument that he has to kill the basilisk first before he stops Ginny and takes the diary. Instead of just taking her to a professor or acting with Snape, he "hopes" that Ginny throws the diary away and wants to take it afterwards. He just "hopes" that everything happens as before and noone gets hurt. Instead of just making up a story of seeing Ginny acting possessed or something like that he lets her be possesses for months. He was the head-auror, right?

He could have just used the Floo to speak with his friend. Or just meet them at least once in the summer. Not contacting them while knowing that Dobby was stealing his mail just for appearance sake is... stupid? But than again, he has been acting like that the entire time. Not acting against the Dursleys, allowing Voldemort to teach the entire year, not acting against Quirell after he almost died during quidditch... he is far too concerned with "not-acting".

It took him 19 years to have that realization about the relationship between his dad, Sirius, and Snape? What an idiot.

relaxed on his hard but turned soft bed. That is such an awkward thing to say. Why not just say magically softened bed?

a most excellent re-do

I would prefer Harry/Luna over Harry/Fangirl with mental issues

okok book, even tho harry learned so much about failings of dumbdumb dark lord he never punished him or minerva. even though he was 37 head of auror, he did not show much intelligence except in first 4-5 chapters. ending was also rushed.