|Reviews for What The Heart Wants|
| Lenka Talkov chapter 9 . 8/26/2012
Hope you will get and read this review cause i am not registred on this page . I wana say that this was - I do not have even words for how amazing it was . Not just the end but the whole story . It belongs to the best I have ever read (honestly i do not exaggerating at all) I love it . That is how i sometimes imagined . Thank you, you are very talented . Please if you wana answer me or reply on review or something please write me on:
| Make-War-Not-Love chapter 9 . 10/29/2011
Fantastic fic. Great job _
| spike'smate chapter 9 . 8/10/2009
fantabulous story loved it glad buffy chose spike more more more please YOU ROCK
| murderscene chapter 9 . 11/7/2008
i liked it
i knew she could choose spike
its what i would've done
| CalmintheChaos chapter 9 . 10/22/2008
Oh my goodness! (I'm sad I'm reading your fictions backwards/out of sequence, but thank you so much for telling me about this one!) This has been the episode I longed for at the end of the Angel series. I only watched the end season because I heard they brought in Spike. Then when he never gets a chance to see Buffy, I was disappointed and heartbroken. You've definately given me closure to such a great romance, that never got to fully bloom, and for that, I thank you. I look forward to many more of your fictions!
| XXspuffster101XX chapter 8 . 12/3/2007
oh...and the English Major within me forgot to mention in my final review that while you did a decent job at the showing of emotion and such, there was also a lot of telling...for example things like Buffy was amused or Angel had a look of anger...things like that...also, you kept jumping from one head to the other...while there is nothing wrong with a third person omniscent narrator, they tend to take away from the story...this would have been much better if you stayed in Buffy's head and processed everything through her POV...this would also probably help with the less telling and more showing, at least that was how I improved that problem in my final story for a fiction writing class that I am taking...also, there was a lot of internal thought that was not properly noted as so...by italicizing the thought or simply putting a ",she/he thought" or summerizing the thought...there was a good example when you suddenly popped into Angel's head, but I can't find it...I just went through the chapters where it could have been twice...anyway, what I mean is instead of something like there's dialogue and then "I don't get it? Why would so and so do something like this." and then back to the narration, you could summerize like narration and then "She couldn't understand why so and so would do something like this." and then continue on with the narration because this way you are showing internal thought without distracting from the rest of the narration and such...these three ways would help distinguish internal thought from the narration...
I hope I haven't confused you or anything with my ramble because I think I got a little whoosh with that last part...but yeah, anyway...I hope these little helpful bits of info will help your writing grow more...it was a good story
...and believe me...I was suprised at how much work I needed on making my stories have a believable lie and being character driven rather than plot driven and such after taking this class...and there I was thinking that I was a decent writer with a bad case of writers block because I couldn't come up with a decent plot that hadn't already been done...it's all about the characters and if you make them believable, then the plot will come easily...and I am so getting off track and such...I really should just end this ramble here before I write a novel...heh...anyway...once again...not a bad story and thanks for sharing it with all of us on fanfiction...later
| XXspuffster101XX chapter 9 . 12/3/2007
I do like the realistic love triangle that you presented...as stupid as I think it is, Angel was Buffy's first love/lover and that is something that stays with you, especially when you are 16 and dealing with emotion and situations that normal 16 year olds don't face...it also didn't help that Angel would always pop up every so often to confuse her again, but her and Spike were destined...their love story is epic and I always felt that Buffy was stupid for clinging on to her teen ideals...I also went to your profile and saw that you are from Germany, which may have to do with why I felt distracted by the dialogue sometimes not sounding real and the description/action parts having lots of grammar problems and such...all in all it was a pretty decent story...I was a little let down with the side story of the baby, very anti-climactic...I know that the main story was the love triangle, but I would have gotten more from this story had you developed the B-story just a bit more...anyway...thanks for posting this story...it's always great to read happy Spuffy endings
| XXspuffster101XX chapter 3 . 12/3/2007
so far the story seems kinda interesting...I'm having some trouble with some of the dialogue sounding realistic or having things repeated like in chapter one when Buffy says that her and the First aren't together anymore and then tells Angel as they are going up the stairs that even though it's none of his buisness, her and the First aren't together anymore...also...I don't think Harm would say git...even with the months she spent with Spike in SunnyD and such, I don't think her valley girl brain would know what git is to call him that
as far as the plot and description goes, it is still interesting enough for me to finish the fic and I will review ya again at the end
| Touch The Dark chapter 9 . 12/1/2007
*cries* it was so good im sad that it is finished! :( well done!
| darklover chapter 9 . 11/30/2007
This chapter was really well done. I loved this ending. You wrote the characters so well. It was perfect. Wow, I never knew Sarah Michelle Gellar said those things. I always thought she was again't the whole Spike/Buffy ship. I thought that because of comments I read that she made about not liking certain B/S moments in season 6. It's great to know she made positive comments about B/S.
| Secret Slayer chapter 9 . 11/30/2007
That was one of the best endings to a story i have ever read! Absolutely loved it! i wish you'd do asequel because the way you ended that was just...GREAT! Great story, completely loved it, well written...loved it! )
| purrbastian chapter 9 . 11/30/2007
yes that was cheezy,
but i like cheezy.
i think i know what interview your talking about and that is so true.
i think a sequel should be in store!
but only want to and have time.
anyways, great chapter!
| Ygritte the Huntress chapter 9 . 11/30/2007
Good story. Nice resolution.
| AdorestheViking chapter 8 . 11/29/2007
Excellent writing, update soon. Please. I am expecting a very happy SPUFFY ending, please!
| darklover chapter 8 . 11/28/2007
Only one more chapter left? Kinda sad that it has to end but I'm really looking forward to that chapter.