Reviews for Black Hayate
Rainbow Ninja Mizuki chapter 2 . 12/20/2008
I LOVE THIS STORY ! OK, now that that's out of my system, i want to comaned you on your writing, andgive you an idea, what if, Ryu gave Sora a nick name like Hayate gave Himaeno one, and she reacted the same way as Himaeno!

Mizuki out!
Taeniaea chapter 2 . 6/6/2008
great story
Aqua Fire582 chapter 2 . 4/5/2008
hey this is great but i think you should get knights and their respected lady knight counterparts to fall in love
anonymous chapter 2 . 11/29/2007

Hayate, I feel bad for you...

anonymous chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
I'm wondering the same as Hayate. Even if I have an idea which BETTER NOT be right... NICE STORY!
ElementalGuardianProtector chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
'Ello half sister, I saw you weren't getting an reviews, so I review for you! YAY! (I count as 1,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0 review because I'm the Insane Little Tenor Saxophone Player! Why is Hayate's arm bleeding? And why did Himeno faint? (I NEVER finished reading your prequel, I I don't know much past the first 2 chapters or whatnot)Well, you just keep on writing, and I'll erview just to encourage you! _ Bye!