|Reviews for Songs|
| Luna Lillyth chapter 3 . 7/29
I can't say that I'm crying over this, yet I can say it kept my attention.
| khfan12 chapter 3 . 7/18/2013
asdfghjkl the feels man!
I loved how you wrote the three POV's on this story, very creative! I also liked that you included that little memory of Braig and little Kairi, that was cute!
| DragonEmerald98 chapter 2 . 4/26/2012
Hey! This made me cry, but why can't my stupid phone see Chapter 2? It's just 'Chapter 2- Harmony' then just blank! What the heck? ...And I was really looking forward to reading that...
| MegaWallflower chapter 3 . 11/27/2011
That was so sad. Now even Xigbar is part of the tragedy... Nice job on this.
| MegaWallflower chapter 2 . 11/26/2011
This was an excellent retelling in a different perspective! Same as last time, it was as if it might have actually happened!
| MegaWallflower chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
That was a really good story! It was as if it could actually have happened! Everyone was in character, and I loved Demyx's explanation of his having a heart. Excellent job.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 3 . 1/7/2011
*sadly; longingly* Oh Braig...if only the events of Birth by Sleep had not occured, Braig...
...oh Braig...:( Still, quite an excellent chapter, alibet extremely unexpected. It was masterfully composed, flowed well, and all of his reactions and relations with the characters (past and present) were remarkable and true.
I liked best what Xigbar added when he spoke with Kairi at the end, when you added that when it did not show in the first chapter.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 2 . 1/7/2011
This chapter was an excellent follow-up to the last one, this being in Demyx's perspective really...well, put the story in perspective, without another way to put it.
I like the mysterious guesture of Luxord when he called Kairi "Namine" and offered the coloring set. Before, I had simply thought it was Demyx being kind but a bit mischiveious, but now...well, I do like Luxord.
Still though...I like the way you write for Demyx. It is a very true, "possible canon" style. I really appreciate styles like that.
I wonder what content could make up the third chapter...
| Sora Tayuya chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
oooh, but so well written. I must congratulate you, this seems very interesting, and yet only the first chapter. Still, this will be a rather unique story, being only 3 pages and yet still so interesting so far.
| surxi25 chapter 3 . 10/2/2010
Great story. It was really well written, and the way you wrote in 3 different POV to link Kairi, Demyx and Xigbar was very original. You got their personalities perfectly.
And you made me cry too :P. Great work!
| LadyAxel22 chapter 3 . 12/31/2009
Aw! *tear* the little twist at the end was great.
| aquaticderivative chapter 3 . 9/7/2009
This was amazing.
| Archivist chapter 3 . 8/5/2009
It's great how you made 3 different POVs. The part at the end of Demyx's POV about the Dancers made me d'aw even moar.
| Sweet Anime Fan chapter 3 . 2/6/2009
This was very sad but I enjoyed it very much! Kairi's possible interaction with the organisation members was interesting. Out of the organisation I quite liked Demyx, he seemed like a good person despite being on the side of the 'bad guys'. Anyway it's always nice to read more in depth about a character and it reminded me of how I felt during the game that I wish Sora understood more about what he was doing when he cleared the entire organisation. Maybe Roxas should've spoke up inside of him! XD
| FemmeSquall chapter 3 . 10/17/2008
very well written i hope you write more. I liked how you made Kairi Ansem the Wise's daughter :) very original